HMD

Mar 14, 2011 02:50

Daxter is a horrible beast who mangles the english language. I try to keep his Brooklyn accent out of the picture whilst still maintaining his voice- but perhaps there's still an issue there? Or a different issue, with my characterization, overall writing style, IC interactions, or even OOC?

This bit, right here? This is where you come in. Feel free to comment to your hearts content- bite nasty, play nasty, this is your space. Even the harshest and silliest of comments can bring up some really good insights, so don't be shy.

hmd

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