Act of Play - The Approaching Curve 1/1

Mar 14, 2008 00:08

Series: Act of Play
Title: The Approaching Curve
Chapter: 1/1
Word Count: 4244
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The title is being politely borrowed from Rise Against. This is, obviously, fake and did not happen. I am merely borrowing the names and faces of real life people and none of this is meant in any way to harm their reputation. This is a work of ( Read more... )

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faith_mars March 14 2008, 06:37:24 UTC
Yesssssssssssssssssss. Kissing. There was kissing! *squeeeeeeeeee*

I loved this part. You totally rock. Can't wait for the next.

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lifesscar March 16 2008, 22:12:32 UTC
Aww, thank you =D

Thank you very much!

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kuhekabir March 14 2008, 11:46:50 UTC
Loved it, thanks for the update. Really, was excellent. Please post more soon :)

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lifesscar March 16 2008, 22:13:39 UTC
Thanks =D I'm glad you loved it. I've already got the next part started so hopefully it will be done soon =D

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indusnm March 14 2008, 12:16:42 UTC
Great installment. I'm enjoying it.

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lifesscar March 16 2008, 22:14:52 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it =D

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luthic24 March 14 2008, 19:42:14 UTC
I just started this today, not really sure how I failed to notice it before, really. It's amazingly well written, and honestly pretty realistic as far as emotional and psychological issues go. I spent a large part of my life studying psychology, you know, back in college, and I always love it when a story really pings with that side of me. So, thanks, really.

Since I was also an English major, I usually try to give more concrete examples of what I liked, but I just mainlined the entire thing in one sitting, so I'll skip that this time. Just be aware I'm really looking forward to the next part. Sorry I got a little rambly (not sure that's actually a word) here. :D

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lifesscar March 16 2008, 22:17:15 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you think so! And I'm really happy to ear that you're finding it realistic. I'm a psychology major so I'm really, really glad to hear that =D

Well, I hope I don't disappoint you with the next part =D

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luthic24 March 17 2008, 15:44:56 UTC
I thought you might be a psych major. I doubled in Psych/English, and I kinda recognized some of what you were doing. Brilliant, btw.

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spriteful March 14 2008, 21:33:54 UTC
I love this story and I'm so glad there's a new chapter. :) Great update. I can't wait to see what's next.

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lifesscar March 16 2008, 22:17:59 UTC
Aww, thank you =D Yes, it takes a while for me to update =( Hopefully I can speed them up soon.

I hope to get more out soon =D

Thanks again!

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