fic: edge of desire (michael johns/david cook) (1/2)

Jun 29, 2010 01:41

Title: Edge of Desire
Pairing: David Cook/Michael Johns
Rating: PG-13
Summary: David Cook sort of falls in and out of love with Michael Johns, and all of the stops in between. 17k.

Having Michael Johns as a roommate is sort of like rooming with himself, except a slightly cooler version of himself. )

fandom: ai, rating: r, ! fic

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emo_bangs June 29 2010, 18:28:03 UTC
I was so excited when I saw a new Mavid fic! made my morning! :DDD

He wants to kiss Michael because he has the terrifying, fleeting thought of how five years down the road, he can picture himself still fake-fighting with Michael, the easy comfort between them stretching out for longer periods of time than he once thought tangible. He thinks maybe he could do this forever, could be this forever, the two of them. Like this.
^favorite part, made me go "awwwww!"

told jokes and made Pepsi come out of David Archuleta’s nose at lunchtime Michael.
^ Lol! i can totally see this happening, MJ scaring poor little Archie

called his mom every Thursday night,
^ this line made me giggle :)

like a bowling ball to the nuts
^ouch

his fingers sort of numb and tingly when they brush against her wedding ring
^awww, poor davey

He bursts into Jason’s room without knocking, which is pretty rude, come to think of it
^ this line made me laugh for some reason

best friends are drunk and play-fighting over who gets to talk to David first.best friends are drunk and play-fighting over who gets to talk to David first.
^lol! I love the side of andy and neal :)

Michael’s explaining why exactly he’s never seen a kangaroo up close
^lol!

one time he almost saw a kangaroo, but it turned out to be a plastic bag.
^LOL!

At that, David almost drops the soap, which-okay, obvious metaphors aside
^LOL!

David’s biting down on one of his knuckles, hard, to stop himself from saying it back.
^awwwww...poor dave

“-I want to be more than that.”
^I kept saying "oh my god!" after this and freaking out.

“You and me?” he says, in this cruel tone that David’s never heard from him before. “That would never happen.”
^MIKEY! DONT BE SO MEAN JUST BECAUSE YOU FEEL THE SAME WAY!

David’s heart kind of hurts
^awwww...this is such a simple sentence but it describes his feeling soooo well

They can’t avoid Ryan Seacrest.
^LOL!

the loudest silence Dave’s ever experienced in his entire life behind.
^oh my god, I love this line.

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