Fic: Coffin For Sam (5/13), blue cortina, dakfinv

[dakfinv]

Title: Coffin For Sam (5/13)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1844 this part; [8306 overall]
Rating: blue cortina
Pairing: some heavy-handed Sam/Gene wink-wink/nudge-nudge, but no direct slashing of the boys
Warnings: angst, just a teeny-tiny bit o' blood
Spoilers: Set after 2.02, so consider anything before that fair game
Summary: When Sam has only 36 hours to

Comments

[jpgr]

Hey, lucky that I had some time before I had to go out! You are just getting too good with this. The verbal barbs, Gene's concern and, oh yes, the tension.

Once it was all cleared, Gene stuffed the hanky away and Sam used the frame of the Cortina to get to his feet. His balance and coordination were notably worse than before. Gene remembered the note had said Tyler would have “no more than” thirty-six hours to live. At the rate Sam was going, it was looking like it could be significantly less than that.

(Oh, one correction: “Here that, Sammy-boy?---should be hear)

[dakfinv]

Thank you! Sam's informed me that I've had enough practice now and if I would stop writing he would very much appreciate it. Fictional characters shouldn't really be speaking to me, should they?

(And I fixed it. Thanks!)

[angeweeks]

Awwww for Gene taking care of Sam, it's very touching!

As with the previous parts, this instalment is well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Looking forward to more! :)

[dakfinv]

Thank you! (Gene's just a big ol' softy. Really. ;) )

[talkingtothesky]

LOL at the exchange over the radio between Gene and Phyllis!

Another wonderful installment! And I rather like all this winking and nudging going on...;) Sam smiled. Gene noticed he still hadn’t moved his hand. He lowered it to Sam’s shoulder instead. If he let go, he thought he might lose him. Aww! :D

Sam really is getting worse, isn't he?! I hope they find the would/will-be killer soon, and he better have an antidote!

[dakfinv]

Thank you! I'm enjoying including the winking and nudging. It may have to happen again.

Sam is on a slow decline but the Gene Genie always gets his man. Doesn't he? ;)

[saintvic]

His balance and coordination were notably worse than before. Gene remembered the note had said Tyler would have “no more than” thirty-six hours to live. At the rate Sam was going, it was looking like it could be significantly less than that.

*sobs*

Okay they need to hurry up and fix him as soon as possible. As always your interaction between Gene and Sam is spot on. And the tension / pain is starting to really build up.

[dakfinv]

Uhm, well, I'm very good at breaking characters but I haven't quite got the handle on fixing them yet... ;)

Thank you!

[wajoma]

I'm hooked well and truely HOOKED

can't wait for the next bit :)

[dakfinv]

Thank you!!