Fic: Coffin For Sam (4/13), blue cortina, dakfinv

[dakfinv]

Title: Coffin For Sam (4/13)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1755 this part; [6462 overall]
Rating: blue cortina
Pairing: Okay, I admit it, there's some heavy-handed Sam/Gene wink-wink/nudge-nudge, especially in this part, but no direct slashing of the boys
Warnings: angst, just a teeny-tiny bit o' blood
Spoilers: Set after 2.02 (yeah, I've changed it), so

Comments

[mikes_grrl]

As usual, a gripping and entertaining installment.

What I really like is how protective Gene is of Sam, even unconsciously. I'm not throwing slash in if you aren't, but I can see it even as an 'older brother' type of instinct in Gene, which is so endearing.

Also appreciate the humiliation Sam feels; being sick IS humiliating, and scary, and makes you feel so helpless, and Sam crying on the floor is something most people who have been through a serious illness can relate too. He wants to do his job, hell he just wants to pee, but he can't, and that is the most wretched feeling in the world. Thanks for that, because it makes the situation real and tense, to me.

[dakfinv]

Thank you! I've been enjoying writing this from strictly Gene's POV because I thought it would be more interesting to see his thoughts on what's happening to Sam, since he would be keeping his feelings slightly more guarded.

[culf]

You're back in the hurting me and making me beg for more business. I loved protective Gene shielding Sam from Hicks, and Sam crying at the bathroom floor made my heart melt, not break, because Gene was so gentle with him, at least gentle for Gene. I felt sorry for Sam being humiliated, though. (Would you possibly consider slashing them in this? If not, I understand).
No one makes me break out the sad Wilson of Doom like you do!

[dakfinv]

Not gonna lie. Before I even read your comment, I was filled with glee over seeing the sad Wilson of Doom again. He's one of my favorite icons. :)

And I don't know where the slash is going to lead. I know where the unimportant things like plot and story are but how much slash will actually develop is still up in the air.

[jpgr]

I don't know why I keep coming back. You torture the hell out of Sam and I keep coming back. Damn. Must be the writing.

Oh, and really, that Delgado line was a low blow--but pure Gene (but I did like the reference)

[dakfinv]

You're just a glutton for angst. (Hell, I don't know why I even keep writing it. There must be someone to blame around here...)

I physically cringed when I wrote the Delgado line and had to keep myself from deleting it because I knew saying it wouldn't have bothered Gene.

Thank you!

[angeweeks]

Aw poor embarrassed Sam!

Another great instalment, loving this series! Looking forward to more.

[dakfinv]

Thank you! (I guess I should give Sam some hugs, shouldn't I?)

[cjk1701]

I'm a sick little bunny for enjoying you torturing poor Sam this much. And I love how supportive Gene is being - for him. Lots of yay. Can't wait for more.

[dakfinv]

If you're sick for reading it, what am I for writing it? ;)

Thank you?