Insane, But Simple (1/1)

[entropynchaos]

Okay - so this is a list of firsts...first Life on Mars fic, first proper sex scene - if you can call it that! - and my first time posting fic on LJ. Please, tell me if I'm doing something wrong - or if the writing's not up to scratch...most of my fic has been put on FF.net before this - and they're not exactly the most discerning lot of people

Comments

[sytaxia]

It’s violent and angry and passionate and amazing. It’s everything he’s come to expect from 1973 all rolled up into one.<--best summary of the Sam/Gene slash relationship. Absolute best. Also - Gene biting! (one of my favorite kinks).

Great little ficlet, and some nice, hot slash. Thanks for posting this, and I hope to see more from you on the comm!

[entropynchaos]

Thank you so much! I kinda wrote it at 4am, so I wasn't sure about posting - but you people have all been so fantastic! ^_^

Also - yeah, that was my favourite line, and also no. 2? I somehow don't think this'll be the end of my LoM fic! *fear meeeeeee* XD

[fawsley]

Oh a lovely bit of hawtness to wake up to of a morning, and yep, I have to pick that line too - It’s violent and angry and passionate and amazing. It’s everything he’s come to expect from 1973 all rolled up into one. Put your finger right on the button there.

[entropynchaos]

Oh wow! It means quite a lot that an author I adore likes the story - thank you *g*

[fawsley]

*blushes*
thats a very kind thing to say, considering I've only written 3 LOM fics and all within the past week!

[entropynchaos]

Which *grins madly* is pretty much as long as I've been watching/reading LoM! Yeah, I'm 'a late bloomer'!

[m31andy]

Mmm. PWP month is still going strong.

Lovely, vivid imagery here. (And any chance of the desk!sequel soon???!)

[entropynchaos]

Desk!sequel will hopefully be coming up...I'm supposed to be writing essays for the end of October though...

...yeah, they're so not gonna get handed in on time! *smirk* Not with all the pretties to play with, anyway!

[m31andy]

*grin*

I look forward to the desk!sequel so I can put it on the rapidly increasing 'Porn Month' list...

[entropynchaos]

Aww...you RECC'D me! *love*

[duckyone]

Uhm, yeah, WOW.

Sorry, finding it hard to form sentences right now.

That was fucking amazing, pun fully intended, and if that was your first ever LoM fic then I think I love you.

I second the request for a sequel.

[entropynchaos]

Aww - thank you sweetie! Yeah - first LoM, first sex scene...

...it's best to just jump right in, don't you think? *g*

And sequel probably/maybe/definitely coming up...be afraid, be very afraid!

[entropynchaos]

Desk!sequel now written and up.

[totallywow]

Squee! Just what I needed, some hot lovely Sam/Gene prettyness. Love.

[entropynchaos]

Thank you kindly! *purrs* Sam and Gene couldn't be anything but pretty, could they? *g*

[totallywow]

Hehe, well, I can think of some other ways to describe them... best kept to myself though. ;p

Pretty is definitely there. I also, BTW, think you should write a sequel to this ;)

[entropynchaos]

Mmm - sequel definitely being planned in my head...which is probably not a comforting thought! *smirk*

Well, there's other ways to describe them...'hot as all hell' springs to mind, as does 'oh, there is a god'!