Comments | lifein1973: Fic: Steady As She Goes (26/86), Blue Cortina, dakfinv

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Fic: Steady As She Goes (26/86), Blue Cortina, dakfinv

Aug 20, 2007 18:40

Title: Steady As She Goes (26/86)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1544 this part; [47,051 overall]
Summary for Whole: After an accidental shooting at the station, Gene struggles to keep his team from tearing themselves apart.
Summary this Part: Sam and Gene have another chat.
Rating: still Blue-ish Cortina, uhm, what's slightly darker than blue?
Warnings: angst ( Read more... )

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Comments 21

fanfic_whore August 20 2007, 22:59:12 UTC

Yey! I'm liking the 20% less angst. The way you play these two is spot on, the banter and bickering is lovely. Thanks!

dakfinv August 23 2007, 02:44:48 UTC

Thanks! I love writing banter and Sam and Gene are just the perfect bantering couple.

violateviolet August 20 2007, 23:00:06 UTC

Wow, for once I don't feel compelled to cry 'poor Sam!'...could this be the apocalypse? @_@

I once sang the majority of the Joseph musical when I had a fever...christ, I'm such a fairy >.>

dakfinv August 23 2007, 02:46:41 UTC

Apocalpyse? Probably. But I thought even Sam deserved a little break.

I once had a friend who imagined herself as Alice in Wonderland and made her mom help her reenact the whole book, while she had a fever. Needless to say she was thoroughly embarrased when she was coherent again.

frelling_tralk August 21 2007, 00:28:39 UTC

Great update!

dakfinv August 23 2007, 02:47:11 UTC

Thanks!

dorsetgirl August 21 2007, 00:53:03 UTC

"You know. Mum. Dad. Boyfriend. That sort of thing." Gene lit a cigarette to hide his eagerness for a response.

You know, one of my favourite things in LoMfic is when Gene really cares about Sammy but hasn't quite admitted it yet...

This is a great update - the plot is working out well; Sam starts to get the idea how much Gene cares; Gene knows Sam thinks he comes from the future - Fantastic!

dakfinv August 23 2007, 02:47:55 UTC

You know these big, tough men. They just can't admit when they love each other.

Thanks!

liquorishflame August 21 2007, 02:02:08 UTC

I too love the boyfriend comment, and when it was followed with "Broke up with yeh, did he? Shame that." I felt quite gleeful :D
Your dialogue is genius as ever! Right jealous I am :)
And awww for the Gene/Sam friendship, neither one admitting just how much it means, wonderful :)

dakfinv August 23 2007, 02:48:57 UTC

I'm glad I induced glee! Lately I've been inducing much sorrow, so glee is definitely good.