Fic: Jabberwocky, Part 19b/?

[sytaxia]

Sam stepped slowly away from the edge of the wood, acutely aware that the wind was howling as it rushed past him, maddeningly strong.  He stepped forward and realized that he was still naked, and that as he walked away, he was heading toward the immense, green field that lay beyond the wood.   He stared at it, and then glanced around.

Comments

[hambelandjemima]

No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no!!!

You can't leave it there - I have to go to bed now, and poor Sammy is in mortal peril!

More clues to help solve the case. I feel as though we're nearly there, yet you, the mistress of suspense, won't let us near the conclusion just yet.

Don't be too long with the next part, please *makes puppy dog eyes*

[sytaxia]

Sorry, didn't mean to scare you quite so much... The next part should be up in a few days, I promise. And I'm glad that the story is still holding your attention, I'm always afraid that people are going to get bored with the long ficcage... Thanks!

[liquorishflame]

ARGHHH!!!

[sytaxia]

Meep!

[pet_lunatic]

Yay, another part! Sorry for not commenting on all of them, but I've been reading...this is such a fantastic story. It's so rich, and you're cliffhangers are just...guh!

Poor Chris...poor Sam...but poor Chris! But poor Sam! *tries to hug them both at once*

I've always liked Chris, but this fic has made me really love the li'l guy...he's like Felicity Kendall, you just want to protect him. All the characters are terrific in this story - I love the way you write them all, and torture them explore their feelings and reactions ;) And the sex scenes were gorgeous.

[sytaxia]

Thank you very much for commenting, and I'm glad that you're enjoying the fic... I really try not to torture the boys too much, but it just comes naturally to my evil, twisted soul... Also, glad that you found the sex scenes to work well: I'd actually not written full-blown slash or het sex before coming to this community, so I'm still fairly new to it.

[untitled_m]

AGHHHHHH!!!!!!
What a brilliant piece is...

[sytaxia]

Thanks very much :)

[saintvic]

And more hints about Chris' past are showing through, can't wait to find out more. Also the main Ray/Chris stuff was something I have been waiting for for a few chapters now but as always you used it to create a situation that will change and maybe cause problems in the future (difference in their attitudes, piblic attitudes etc).

And poor Sam (I seem to say that a lot) his world just keeps getting more confusing and pulling him down. His realisation of being hunted was sharply written with a real sense of menace.

So as always I loved this - am going to have to set myself some time to the side to reread all of it soon I think.

: )

[sytaxia]

Thanks very much for your comment!

Chris/Ray is going to be interesting, and there will definitely be a bit of conflict over their different views on their situation; glad that it's working well for you :) Also glad that the realization came across so well; it just seemed like he wasn't quite cottoning on to the situation in the last part, and I felt that I had to do something that would provoke more of a reaction from him.

I'm glad that you're enjoying; once it's all finished, I'm hoping on going through and revising it a bit to make it more cohesive, and then posting the whole thing as a downloadable word doc or something.