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Aug 02, 2007 01:26

TITLE: Two Foot Small
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liquorishflame August 2 2007, 01:35:28 UTC
Awww, poor Chris. He does try, bless his heart. And look, he even gets his man :)
P.S. Liked the bit about Sam throwing his TV out the window! :D

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ailcia August 2 2007, 07:28:43 UTC
I love Chris: he's so useless, and wonderful with it!

Thankyou very much!

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lo0o0ony_lauren August 2 2007, 02:51:51 UTC
HEEEE. You know how I feel about this, or at least you know how I feel about the first bit, but still: huzzahs! I'm really knackered for some reason, so I can't leave a better comment than that, but there you go. YAYE CHRIS. ILhim. :D

The only thing I would say is, you describe this as "Sam/Chris, Sam/Gene", but I couldn't see any Sam/Gene (no more than you get in the show anyway), and would be intrigued to know where it's implied? Lol nosy, but do bear in mind how frazzled my brain is tonight.

Love at your eyes, missus! xxxxxx

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ailcia August 2 2007, 07:18:58 UTC
Why thankyou, love... I got itchy-posting-fingers once again and yes, I lose, but thankyou. :D

Yes! Well, the thing, right, is... is that I wrote that bit before I'd finished the fic itself (lol impatience). I sort of half-set it up (what, Alice, because Sam looked at Gene once? Oh well done), because it was going to be that Sam got hit by a car and then Chris got shouted at in the hospital by Gene who suddenly realised what Sam meant and Chris had to get comforted by Ray and etc etc ETC.... But it just didn't seem to go in that direction but I forgot to take that bit out and OH GOD.

:D

Cheeeeeeeeers and love in your general direction, sunshine!
xxxxxxxxa

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hambelandjemima August 2 2007, 03:25:02 UTC
Great fic :) You really had Chris in character here.

I, too, loved the bit about Sam chucking his telly out of his flat. Can see him doing it ;)

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ailcia August 2 2007, 07:27:45 UTC
Thankyou very much! I wasn't sure what to do with him, if I'm honest, so I'm glad you think it's alright!

Sam'll never not be a bit mental, will he? :D

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fanfic_whore August 2 2007, 07:38:44 UTC
Bless him. And snogging in the middle of the road...hmm not the best idea ever boys!

But nice fic. There's never enough Sam/Chris around for my taste!

Erm one thing...do you even have to defend your DCI to a raper...rapist I assume.

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ailcia August 2 2007, 07:42:12 UTC
Thankyou... To be honest, I prefer Sam/Gene, which is why this probably comes off as more of a friendship... thing? I don't know.

Yeah, I know I'd done that: Chris' inner voice seems like it might be grammatically incorrect to me! ;P

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annacoriander August 2 2007, 11:14:49 UTC
Eep. ♥

"All because he couldn’t say thank you any other way." I like that - that somehow sums up the whole thing to me, because it's like "AAHH KISSING. But friendly kissing, maybe?" Ahh I explain myself so well. What I mean to say is that... oh you know what I mean :P I hope. You wrote "although it doesn't even have to be slash, really" in the description, after all *g*

The bit about the telly made me laugh a bit too much :D

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ailcia August 2 2007, 11:47:48 UTC
YES! THANKYOU ANNA. Once again you've read my brain. THAT is precisely what I meant by.... all this. God, you win. Thankyou!

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ailcia August 2 2007, 11:49:42 UTC
*G*

Thankyou so much, love! I've not really written Chris before, and am still a bit shaky in LoM fic as a whole, so thankyou so much!

Glad you enjoyed and love right back at you, there!
xxxxxxa

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