Fic: Steady As She Goes (10/86)

[dakfinv]

Title: Steady As She Goes (10/86)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1159 (this part)
Summary for Whole Fic: After Chris is shot by accident at the station, Gene struggles to keep his team from tearing themselves apart as Ray takes out his anger on Sam, Annie makes a decision which jeopardizes Gene's career, and Sam gets involved with a murder.
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Comments

[lennon_on_sale]

*bites lip* Poor Sammy. Can't help but wonder what he did!

[dakfinv]

I know, I can't seem to give Sam a break. We'll find out what happened soon!

[liquorishflame]

Gene gave up sex for Sam, he must care :D
Nice to see Chris awake, and the chap. is the right balance of humour and drama.

[dakfinv]

Thank you! We won't tell Sam how much Gene cares though. Neither of them would ever admit it.

[titanicgeek]

Haha, it cracks me up how you write Gene - it's perfect. Another excellent chapter. I love how you get them done so quickly. :D

[dakfinv]

Thanks! And you can thank Starbuck's for the relative quickness of the chapters. I can't seem to do anything there but write.

[fanfic_whore]

Yeah I agree, your Gene is darn good. Nice work!

[dakfinv]

Thank you!

[dorsetgirl]

This is great; I'm really enjoying this. Whe I get time I'll go back and read the whole thing in one go, because it's really good.

Just one little nit-pick; no-one said "prolly" in 1973, and I don't think Gene would anyway. This tripped me up a bit.

[dakfinv]

Thanks for the review and the nit-pick! I'll make sure to avoid "prolly" in the future. I'm glad you're enjoying it!