Steady As She Goes (2/86)

Jul 09, 2007 19:46

Title: Steady As She Goes (2/86)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1563
Rating: Blue Cortina
Warnings: still angsty, but less swearing and blood in this part
Spoilers: references to 1.07, 1.08, and 2.01, but nothing major (I think)
Summary: The team begins to cope with the after effects.
Disclaimer: Still don't own. Still don't sue.
A/N: Thank you all for your ( Read more... )

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liquorishflame July 10 2007, 00:15:48 UTC
Thanks for updating so quickly! :D
Ray's inner monoglogue is great, him trying to remember what happened to his cigarettes, and then realizing. It's perfect. And Gene is so mad at Sam, poor Sam.
Let Chris be okay, please? *pouts*

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dakfinv July 10 2007, 00:43:42 UTC
I kind of ignored Ray when I was writing my ficathon fic, so I wanted to make up for it here. I'm glad you like it. I'll have to wait and hear from Chris' doctors to see how he's doing...

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ebonlock July 10 2007, 00:36:03 UTC
Loving it, but dying to know where Sam is while all this is going on. Perhaps having a long chat with the Test Card Girl? :)

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dakfinv July 10 2007, 00:45:15 UTC
Thanks for the reviews! Don't worry, next chapter is going to be all about Sam.

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liquorishflame July 10 2007, 01:35:29 UTC
I love your icon! :D It's perfect :)

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lennon_on_sale July 10 2007, 03:24:01 UTC
:) Ah, I love good fic.

Thanks for updating so quickly! Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

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dakfinv July 10 2007, 03:58:57 UTC
Thanks! I hope to keep up a fairly steady pace, but we'll see how life goes. (I love your icon by the way!)

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galacticowl July 10 2007, 04:35:01 UTC
Just amazing. It's just like reading a novel or watching the show. I love it!

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dakfinv July 10 2007, 04:46:10 UTC
Thanks! Luckily Chris never did get seriously injured on the show. I guess that's why I'm torturing him here.

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wiccagal_1996 July 10 2007, 07:18:31 UTC
Adore the way this is reading like an episode, it's gripping with enough interaction between all the characters for it to be an impressive ensamble piece.
I know Sammy sent Chris down to the Collater's den but Gene and Ray are being a bit hard on him, and that's perfect, that's exactly how they'd be...I just kinda feel sorry for him.
Please don't kill off Chris *pleads*
xx

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wiccagal_1996 July 10 2007, 07:22:09 UTC
oh, and I forgot to say, I think you've got Annie spot on :)
x

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dakfinv July 10 2007, 15:37:43 UTC
Thank you! I realized after writing the first chapter that I'd completely forgotten about Annie. Whoops. So I gave her basically her own chapter. Hopefully Gene will come to his senses soon, but he is quite stubborn...

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missscarlett July 10 2007, 08:18:30 UTC
I love speedy updates!

This was a great continuation from the first chapter. You've got a nice mystery going with Sam's vanishing act and you write Annie in particular very well, and have a good handle on the other team member's reactions and interaction.

Enjoying this a lot. :)

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dakfinv July 10 2007, 15:39:28 UTC
Thanks! I'm going to try and keep the updates as speedy as possible, as long as the bunnies keeping feeding me ideas.

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