Comments | lifein1973: Fic: Jabberwocky, Part 2/? (Part 1 Posted as Untitled)

sytaxia in lifein1973

Fic: Jabberwocky, Part 2/? (Part 1 Posted as Untitled)

May 17, 2007 12:16

“In case you haven’t noticed, we have a spate of horribly grotesque murders, a dozen flocks of bastards and harpies and all manner of journalists screeching about our ears, every super from Rathbone to Barrington one inch from losing faith in us, and by us, I mean me, your illustrious, glorious leader, and you pick this day of all days ( Read more... )

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sytaxia May 18 2007, 11:50:40 UTC

Thanks! And thanks for the quick return on 3 and 4, I promise to get 5 and 6 to you soon.

wiccagal_1996 May 17 2007, 17:52:40 UTC

Fantastic! Bloody, completely fantastic...can't *wait* for the next part and I'm not in the least tapping my fingers or anything,lol.
Characterizations are so spot on it's scary. Lovely work.
x

sytaxia May 18 2007, 11:51:39 UTC

*GLEE* Thanks! The next few parts should be up soon, I'm glad that you're enjoying it.

ex_emeriin213 May 17 2007, 17:55:46 UTC

*Shudders* This is bloody good and chilling and twisted. I love this state of mind, where he thinks that this is all his fault, and on some level, he must want it. I was so glad when this came up on my friendlist and I hope more will come soon. He'll be getting more abuse before he gets saved, right? ;)

sytaxia May 18 2007, 11:53:52 UTC

Thanks! Oh, I dunno, I think there may be a bit more !PAIN! in the mix, although a lot of what follows is going to be psychological... Granted, my mind seems to be twisted as of late, so there may be even more; the fic is taking on a life of its own.

elfbert May 17 2007, 17:57:38 UTC

Hey, I'm really enjoying this, thanks for posting.

If you need any help with the entire arc-eye issue, I'm a welder and I've experienced the joy of arc-eye a few times now.

Looking forward to the next part :)

sytaxia May 18 2007, 11:57:32 UTC

Thanks very much, and thanks for the info offer: all I've got is from an ancient post from an old yahoo group that I was active in back in 99-02 when I was heavily ficcing; in fact, I just re-visited it for the first time in years, and I think I've attempted to respond to you in it... If I get any facts wrong, please let me know, and I'll correct it for the archive version. Glad you're enjoying the fic :)

bistokids May 17 2007, 18:41:05 UTC

Christ! I love dark!fic, but you are pushing the limits of what I can read, and I mean that as a total compliment. It's not just the content, it's the chillingly plausible style you've written this in. Can't wait for the next bit.

sytaxia May 18 2007, 11:58:08 UTC

Thanks very much! More coming soon, I hope I won't disappoint...