Fic: untitled, part 1/?

[sytaxia]

            Sam Tyler raised an eyebrow as he watched Gene Hunt rapidly spoon a can of baked beans into a bowl, and then proceed to cover it in a liberal wash of whiskey.  “Gov, that cannot possibly have any nutritional value whatsoever; in fact…” he was cut off by a loud snort.

“Nutritional value?  You gonna make me sit through some

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[echo_voice]

Um. Wow.
This is going to be brilliant. I love the dynamics of the team in this: it's just perfect.
“Gov, considering that I haven’t even briefed you in full on the details of the second victim, would you mind telling us exactly where we’re going at three times the legal limit, and on the WRONG SIDE OF THE ROAD!!!”
Hahahahaha - so Gene. So Sam, actually.

[sytaxia]

I hope that I manage to keep the team interactions going in this - it's a lot easier before I chuck my giant, ugly wrench in the middle of their workings. Thanks very much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it :)

[cribbins]

“In or out, Chris, in or out! Cartwright, Love, will you secure his safety seat, please?”

It's funny that this bit wasn't actually in an episode because it feels like it should have been.

Your characterisations, especially Annie, are spot on. And the last part was horrifying.

[sytaxia]

Thanks so much for commenting, I'm glad that you liked it. Unfortunately, I tend to be very good at horrifying - I don't know why, I was never locked in the closet as a small child (well, except for that time when I was 8 and locked myself in while searching for the lamppost...)

There's a lot more horrifying on the way, but I promise to try and think up some decent funny for the last few chapters.

[cribbins]

Oh dear, the horrifying was meant to be a compliment! Seriously, I'm a big fan of the scary, I've read Red Dragon a couple of times now. Sam is rather 'Will'ish, isn't he?

[duckyone]

Okay, I'm very intrigued. Sign me up for the next chapter.

[sytaxia]

Thanks very much for commenting, glad that you liked it.

[bistokids]

Good grief! Loving it. Hope there'll be more very soon, I'm deeply intrigued.

“Sycophant,” Sam muttered under his breath.

“Berk,” Ray responded under his.

Totally them! Excellent.

[sytaxia]

Thanks for reading and commenting, comments = <3

I hope I can keep up the dynamics properly as I continue; it gets a bit difficult once I remove them from their normal positions in the show. I hope I don't disappoint.

[wiccagal_1996]

Urm, WOW!
Characterization, interacion, dialogue...you've got it all babes and then some. I'm loving this. Can't wait to see where it goes.
x

[sytaxia]

Thanks very much for commenting! I absolutely adored your WTS 'verse, and all of your other fic, so getting a compliment from you definitely makes my day. Hope you like the rest, as well.