The Weekly Drabble Challenge 215 - Pan-Fandom Tropes

Dec 14, 2012 16:29

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dorsetgirl December 16 2012, 22:36:00 UTC
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"Thing is, Sam, I wouldn’t normally do this. Not my style you know, men."

Sam panted, “Well as you’re here, d’you think you could do it a bit harder?"

Gene did it a bit harder.

"That good enough for you, Doris?"

"Yeah, that’s good".

Time passed. Gene pushed, Sam panted.

Eventually matters reached a conclusion and they lay back quietly.

"So - if you don’t normally do this, Gene; why did you?"

"Aliens, Sam. Aliens made me do it."

"So, nothing to do with the fourteen whiskies and my new trousers, then?"

"Nothing to do with that at all, Sam."
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fern_tree December 17 2012, 10:12:24 UTC
XD Oh Gene. The aliens, eh? /:)

This is fantastic! :D

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dorsetgirl December 17 2012, 10:56:28 UTC
Thank you!

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anonyma73 December 17 2012, 10:18:22 UTC
LOL!!! Aliens... yes, Gene, we all believe you!

I love how you keep the sex casual... nothing's going on here, just keep reading. ;)

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dorsetgirl December 17 2012, 10:57:12 UTC
Haha, writing sex has never been my forte - thanks for reading!

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girlwtmousyhair December 17 2012, 11:46:33 UTC
Ha - that casual, no fanfare approach is really effective, I love it!

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dorsetgirl December 17 2012, 13:50:33 UTC
Thank you!

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xysabridde December 17 2012, 20:11:26 UTC
Wish I could give this excuse. "Aliens ate my coursework, sir..."

Love it- the ending made me laugh so much. Great drabble!

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dorsetgirl December 17 2012, 20:28:57 UTC
Glad you liked it - thank you!

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margo_kim December 17 2012, 21:16:26 UTC
Hahaha, I love it. Gene sounds very convincing ;) I really like the phrase Eventually matters reached a conclusion because, I don't know, it's such a matter-of-fact way and yet classy way of saying "and then sex was done".

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dorsetgirl December 17 2012, 21:33:27 UTC
Wow, I'm not sure I've ever written anything "classy" before! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting.

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thesmallhobbit December 17 2012, 22:39:55 UTC
And Gene will continue blaming the aliens, whenever there is a repeat.

Nice one!

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dorsetgirl December 19 2012, 10:10:23 UTC
Yes - every time the whisky hits a certain level and Sam is wearing his new trousers, there will be aliens! Thanks for reading.

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little_cello December 17 2012, 23:37:49 UTC
HAH. The aliens. Of coouuuuurse. :D

I love how you wrote this. So matter-of-fact-ly, for some reason I find this highly hilarious. Especially the last two lines, they are priceless. <3

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dorsetgirl December 19 2012, 10:12:58 UTC
The matter-of-fact-ness is kind of odd, but I think it comes from Sam trying to think to himself, "Aliens. Yes, of course. Aliens." in a very matter-of-fact way, because he won't want to piss Gene off and risk there being no repeat performance. I'm glad you liked it - thanks for commenting!

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