Comments | lifein1973: FIC: Pain in the Neck, Mamishka, Brown Cortina, Sam/Gene

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FIC: Pain in the Neck, Mamishka, Brown Cortina, Sam/Gene

Dec 25, 2010 13:18

Title: Pain in the Neck
Rating: Brown Cortina
Pairing: Sam/Gene
Word Count: 2,529
Notes: This is for bastardlyarmed as her replacement Ficathon 2010 writer. Sorry it's so late, but I did get it to you by Christmas, as promised! I hope you like it! :D For the rest of you, this is mostly definitely an AU. ;) No beta on this, so if I've made mistakes, either Brit ( Read more... )

rating: brown cortina, genre: au, character: sam, ficathon 2010, pairing: sam/gene, character: gene, fic type: slash

Comments 13

edzel2 December 26 2010, 10:32:38 UTC

Wow - you don't get much more AU than that!!! I thought it was great, very funny, very in-character (apart from the obvious differences that is, and they're fine!) and Very Hot. Now all we need is for one of the very talented artists on ...1973 to come up with a suitable illustration....

Very enjoyable! Thanks for sharing!

mamishka December 26 2010, 12:58:27 UTC

Yeah. ;) bastardlyarmed's first request was "Vampire!Gene AU, Sam/Gene, pointy stakes". But I didn't want to say that up front. Thought it would be more fun if I peppered in a few hints but left it a surprise for awhile. ;)

Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. :)

seileach67 December 27 2010, 03:16:32 UTC

<3 I love vampire AUs! This was really hot and I enjoyed it very, very much. One teeny little typo leaped out at me in the paragraph where Gene bites Sam, in the sentence "The sound that escapes Sam's throat...Gene drinks from his throat and stokes his cock..." that should be "strokes", right?
I can't recall spotting any others. OK, taking off the red-pencil hat now LOL
Great job overall! <3

mamishka December 27 2010, 03:33:09 UTC

Oooh! Good catch, fixed!

And yay, another vampire AU lover! ;) I have to admit, I felt a bit tempted to write more in this AU after writing this one. Showing Sam's arrival. How Gene can be a cop and a vampire and hunt others of his kind. How that all works and such. How they hook up. Hmmmmm! Maybe. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting! :D

wesseling December 28 2010, 23:31:12 UTC

Really interesting AU and very well written! Will there be more?

mamishka December 29 2010, 01:47:36 UTC

Thank you very much! I've been feeling a little twitchy that people maybe didn't like it so much as there hasn't been a lot of response thus far...

This was initially a one-off for the 2010 Ficathon, but there could be more...

Do you want more?

wesseling December 29 2010, 22:13:34 UTC

Yes, of course! :)

I usually don't give a lot of feedback as I read most of the stories when I'm offline, but I just had to give you some feedback for this AU. *thumbs up*

bastardlyarmed December 30 2010, 07:49:21 UTC

Oh my god thank you! This is amazing and totally hot. You have to write more in this verse :)

mamishka December 30 2010, 13:43:19 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad that you liked it! :D

I will seriously consider writing more in this 'verse. :)

chamekke January 1 2011, 04:49:54 UTC

What a fun and intriguing 'verse you've created here! I love the idea that when Sam landed in 1973, he had to contend, not just with the changes we see in the series, but a Manchester filled with vampires. ('Stakeout'. Heh.)

But is Gene 'out' as a vampire in general? (I was wondering if his Litton comment implied that.) Do the rest of CID have any idea? Is he only able to move about at night, too, like the vampires he's fighting? And are there other 'good' vampires in CID besides Gene? *suddenly has mental picture of Chris as a vampire and tries not to go into capslock*

mamishka January 1 2011, 05:02:09 UTC

*grins* Why thank you! :D

Yeah, the basic idea is that Sam's whole world has been turned upside down and on its head. Some of the verse is very thoroughly thought out and other parts less so. But Gene is definitely 'out' as a vampire and yes the Litton comment was definitely a tip of the hat toward that fact. ;) CID definitely knows. I'm still pondering the whole day/night thing and was leaning toward 'aversion to sunlight' rather than 'sleeps all day and only functions at night' version of vampires. As for who else in CID might be a vampire, I hadn't yet considered or decided. ;)

Is capslock in this case a thing of glee or horror? ;)

chamekke January 1 2011, 05:05:42 UTC

Oh, definitely glee. I actually rather like the thought of one or two of the more inoffensive characters being vampires (e.g. June).

And I agree with Gene with all my heart. Sam does have a CRAZY sexy neck. *points at icon*

mamishka January 1 2011, 05:13:19 UTC

Exactly! It's so LONG and LOVELY! Definitely something that caught Vampire!Gene's attention right away. >;)~

I'll have to ponder the vampire thing some more. I think it would be more likely that Ray would be a vampire as well. That kind of power.... hard to be humble and sweet when you got it. Gene would be a good enough Sheriff to rein it in. Ray? Ray I could see being something of a wild card. Trying to follow Gene's example but with a more natural tendency to be violent and 'bad'.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm.