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Fic: The Philanderer and the Thief (7/11), blue cortina, dakfinv

Nov 04, 2009 18:56

Title: The Philanderer and the Thief (7/11)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1873 this part; approx 20,000 overall
Rating: blue cortina
Genre: buddy cop, humor, mystery
Warnings: language, mild violence
Summary: Fed up with their constant bickering, Gene sends Sam and Ray out to a remote village to stop a local crime spree. Will they solve the case before they ( Read more... )

fic, character: ray, character: sam

Comments 12

samueljames November 5 2009, 00:18:13 UTC

They're not having much luck, looking forward to seeing them co-operating with each other.

dakfinv November 9 2009, 02:53:21 UTC

Hopefully this will mean a change of fortune for them, but then again, maybe not. ;)

Thanks for commenting!

jpgr November 5 2009, 00:22:42 UTC

Thank you for getting this posted before hte game. I don't like to think of what you would have done to Sam should it end tonight.

“So,” Ray began. “You know what the Guv said, ‘bout us working together?”

“Yeah?”

“Think we should try it? Temporarily.”

“Hell, yes. Temporarily. Of course.”

“Of course.”

And of course, now we get the title.
Wonderful :)

dakfinv November 9 2009, 02:54:15 UTC

Thank you!

Oh, baseball.
*cries bitterly*
Sam will have to pay for that, just not here. :)

space_oddity_75 November 5 2009, 08:40:04 UTC

Bwahahaha! Poor Sam and Ray. They can't seem to do anything right when they are together, can they? Well, at least they're still alive.

I wonder what's gonna happen to them next, but I'm afraid it's not gonna be good, since you're deus ex machina behind all this, and we all know how evil you are.

Great chapter!

dakfinv November 9 2009, 02:54:59 UTC

Oh they're alive. For now. :)

Hey, I'm trying not to be too evil in this fic. I'm thinking of saving the angst monkeys for later...

Thank you!

lunadeath02 November 5 2009, 14:57:26 UTC

Oh, loved this chapter! I especially giggled a lot when that Sergeant kept shoving the rag back into Sam's mouth after every time he asked him a question! XD And yay for them about to work together! Cannot wait. :D

dakfinv November 9 2009, 02:55:17 UTC

Thank you so much!

thesmallhobbit November 5 2009, 23:01:03 UTC

I wonder which one is more upset at their "crime", Ray for being a philanderer or Sam as a thief? This is great.

dakfinv November 9 2009, 02:55:57 UTC

Hm, good question. Personally, I'd say Sam as he would hate for others to think he'd violated the law.

Thanks for reading and commenting!