Ficathon 2009: Ethereal, brown cortina, dakfinv

[dakfinv]

Title: Ethereal
Author: dak
Word Count: 4249
Rating: brown cortina
Warnings: angst, sort of non-con (Not trying to be blase about it, but it's hard to explain why it's "sort of" without spoiling the fic. If this is something that squicks you, I'd recommend not reading this, just to be on the safe side.)
Summary: Sam can never tell what's real and what's

Comments

[thesmallhobbit]

I like this. Not sure I understand it totally - am I meant to if phantom hands leave real marks? - it definitely messes with my brain. But I really like it.

[dakfinv]

Thank you! Messing with the brain was part of the plan, so I'm glad it worked. :)

[jean_geanie]

OH I love this! Gene thinking Sam's mad but then getting rid of Crane in 2006 *lip wobbles* I realy love this because I can just picture the moment Gene realised Sam really was from the future and then immediately realised what else that meant *more lip wobbles*.

Really beautifully written and executed.

[dakfinv]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. It was a tricky one to write.

[sunnyrea]

Definitely not a thing I've ever seen done before but very interesting!

[dakfinv]

Thank you!

[amproof]

I squealed when I saw that you had taken my prompt. Loudly.

This is so clever and amazing and just the kind of hurt I was looking for. Gene getting things mixed up and thinking Sam raped that girl and ripping his pants down--heart in mouth.

OMG the end!!!

I love it.

Thank you so much!!!

[dakfinv]

I'm so glad you liked it! When I received the prompt I knew I wanted to use a canon bad guy, but not Warren, and I took it from there. It became a lot more twisted than I expected but I hope it works. I loved the prompt. :)

[silvaa]

What an absolutely genius idea, loved it :D

x

[dakfinv]

Thank you!