Comments | lifein1973: Fic: Sweat (1/1), green cortina, dakfinv

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Fic: Sweat (1/1), green cortina, dakfinv

Apr 27, 2009 18:24

Title: Sweat
Author: dak
Word Count: 2367
Rating: green cortina
Warnings: just some mild Sam pain
Pairing: none
Summary: Being handcuffed to the inside of a car on a very hot summer's day, is not what Sam would call "having a good day."

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fic, character: sam

Comments 11

sarahleia April 27 2009, 22:54:41 UTC

I'm beginning to develop a taste for your fics. I could feel the heat, smell it, almost taste the stifling air, even though it's a really cold day here. Brilliant. And the last line? There's only one word for that. Fantastic.

edzel2 April 27 2009, 23:03:20 UTC

Bloody fantastic. What else can I say? More in that vein, pretty please...?!?

culf April 27 2009, 23:13:34 UTC

Oooh, I like it a lot!
I could practically smell the vomit from the way you described it, which was less than pleasant, to be honest.
I really loved the fluttering in and out of consciousness, letting the outside world blend with the hallucinations like you did.
And the end was very cute. I'm glad Gene was there with him, and yes, if there was brain damage, no one would probably notice. At least not for a while.

amproof April 27 2009, 23:56:40 UTC

Another great one! I liked the interweaving of speech through Sam's hallucinations, what had happened and what was happening. That was really interesting.

Killer last line. LOL!

This actually feels like a happy fic thanks to that.

mamishka April 28 2009, 02:14:15 UTC

I love your stuff so much. :-) Verra nice little fic, though I did want to know more of the story that lead up to it.

"Get yourself in some serious situations, don’t you? Always getting guns pointed at you. Getting yourself kidnapped. Drugged.”

Mostly because of us sick and twisted fanficers who do so love to torture these characters. ;-)