Fic: The Art of Being Lost and Found (25/?), blue cortina, dakfinv

Nov 07, 2008 15:42

Title: The Art of Being Lost and Found (25/?)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1881 (this part); (36,336 in total, so far)
Rating: blue cortina
Warnings: none here
Summary: Post 2.08. When the Guv goes missing, CID is saddled with an inept "interim" DCI. To find Gene, and the truth, Ray must team up with a hated enemy.

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estel_angel November 7 2008, 21:02:12 UTC
The lot thickens. Great chapter look forward to next one. It is good to see that Sam was correct

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dakfinv November 9 2008, 17:11:25 UTC
Thank you!

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space_oddity_75 November 7 2008, 21:27:35 UTC
Yay for finding the letter! But now the plot thickens even more, and I can't wait to read what other twists and turns you have in store for us before it reaches a conclusion. :)

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dakfinv November 9 2008, 17:11:50 UTC
I'm glad you're enjoying it! This one has been fun to twist around. :)

Thank you!

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culf November 7 2008, 22:01:40 UTC
Oh, I'm very excited now!
I loved the letter and I really didn't like the nasty guard. How can you not check on people when they're shouting for help? Even if they're not attacked, just because the experience they're going through isn't really, it doesn't mean the fear isn't. How can anyone just ignore another human being in pain? Especially when you're employed to help these people!

Sorry, I know I'm ranting at fictional characters, but that just means that you did your job properly when you managed to evoke emotions like that.

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dakfinv November 9 2008, 17:13:34 UTC
*puts on devil's advocate hat*
In Joe's defense, he's probably desensitized to all that pain. He's sees it day in and day out and it's just means nothing to him now.
*Takes off hat*

I'd never ignore Sammy if he were screaming. I cuddle him tight and never let go...

Thank you!

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mistress_pol November 8 2008, 00:04:37 UTC
I've just caught up on the last few chapters and I don't even know where to start with my reactions! So happy they've found the letter and have something to go on (although London's a pretty big place - the words 'needle in a haystack' spring to mind). And while a part of me is sad about Sam being attacked (although mainly because Gene isn't there to comfort him), another part is all too aware that it'd be a whole hell of a lot easier for Sam to escape from that hospital than from the loony bin. :P Get the boy outta there!!

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dakfinv November 9 2008, 17:14:51 UTC
Thank you so much for reading!

I'd love to get Sam out but the angst monkeys are very much against it.

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jpgr November 8 2008, 00:59:16 UTC
Whatever kind of wheel you use for spinning tales, I want one! ANother wonderful installment (as if I read any other kind from you).

“Tyler, you bastard,” he sneered and shook his head. As he rose, he caught sight of Bresson’s bedside table. Deciding it couldn’t hurt, he reached for the other drawer, pulling it out in one fluid motion. Setting the second drawer aside, Ray again reached inside, tapped his hand against the bottom, and immediately felt paper. He quickly pulled out two slips of paper, folded in half together, and opened them to see “Dear Mr. Hunt” across the top.

“Tyler, you beauty,” he smiled as he started to read the letter.

How easy he changes his mind. ; )

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dakfinv November 9 2008, 17:15:57 UTC
Just take one angst monkey, one plot bunny, tie to a merry-go-round and spin heartily. :)

Thank you!

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