Fic: The Art of Being Lost and Found (19/?), blue cortina, dakfinv

[dakfinv]

Title: The Art of Being Lost and Found (19/?)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1494 (this part); (26,419 in total, so far)
Rating: blue cortina
Warnings: none here
Summary: Post 2.08. When the Guv goes missing, CID is saddled with an inept "interim" DCI. To find Gene, and the truth, Ray must team up with a hated enemy.
A/N: And we're back. I did not mean to

Comments

[jpgr]

remind me never to piss Ray off. So Gene had been to see Sam and they hatched up a plan and the others weren't supposed to know. Just what are you plotting?

[dakfinv]

Plot? What plot?
*evil laughter*

Thank you!

[anonymous]

..not signed up to owt! but loving this fic, ya hooked me with steady as ..and all that goes with it

....“I want him locked in a room, strapped down. He’s not cooperating.”..

but seriously....RAY!!

goes back into her corner and hugs Sam and plots a solo search for gene!!

[dakfinv]

Thank you! So glad you're enjoying it.

[culf]

He thought it was so simple, the prat. They’d locked him up and forgot about him and that choice haunted no one but Sam. That choice hadn’t hurt any of them but Sam. It was always all about Sam Tyler.
In all honesty, Ray, I do think it hurt Sam just a tiny bit more than it did you guys. Also, I really want to kick your ass for what you did to Sam at the end there! That was horrible, bordering on evil. And Chris, how could you let Ray get away with doing that!

I'm not talking to fictional characters as if they can hear me. Stop looking at me like that!

Brilliant chapter, Gene's mystery is becoming more and more exiting. I'm really curious about what he's done. Also, my heart is crying out for Sam right now. *tries to hug him to keep him safe*

[dakfinv]

Ray wants you to know he's not listening but is in fact, staring at your chest. And possibly your bum. And he still hates Sam Tyler. Maybe as much as Cecil.

You'll find out more about Gene in the next chapter. (Yes! Some answers revealed!) And you'll probably cry for Sam some more. But, that's only to be expected, isn't it?

[mikes_grrl]

Wow, the twisty turny plot! ARRRGGGHHH!

I love Ray trying to convince himself that what they did to Sam did not affect them, when it so obviously did.

You are still showing Ray as acting completely within character; I can see him losing his temper and going off on Sam about Gene's visit, not even stopping to consider that GENE might be the one who told Sam not to reveal it. Ray is single minded and convinced of Sam's unbalanced mentality, which is perfect because that is SO Ray, and sad, because it isn't helping anyone much.

And Chris bring Sam a pie! AWWWWWW!!!!!

I like how you show Sam trying to stand up for himself and fight back, but is so broken by the 'treatment' that he's not very good or consistent at it.

The mystery deepens!

[dakfinv]

Ray is such a master of denial, isn't he? It's hard keeping the bastard in character when I do want to make him a sympathetic character. But some of the things he does are just plain wrong or mean.

Thank you1

[gritsinmisery]

This plot's got more kinks in it than the tail of a Siamese cat turned feral.

[dakfinv]

Thank you!

You do get some answers in the next part. :)