Fic: the butterfly flapping in his throat, by severinne (Brown Cortina, Sam/Gene)

[severinne]

Title: the butterfly flapping in his throat
Author: severinne
Rating: Brown Cortina
Warnings: Dirty, dirty talk pretty much from start to finish. The action’s pretty tame, but the conversation does drift into BDSM territory at times.
Pairing: Sam/Gene
Word Count: 1829

Summary/Notes: Because my first Porntoberfest attempt utterly failed on the PWP

Comments

[severinne]

Yeah, that clip had me less than coherent for days, let me tell you...

Thanks for reading, and best of luck with the, um, recuperating ;)

[jean_geanie]

o.0

Gene and dirty talk.

What I love so much about this is that it is unashamedly hot, and that it is really nothing at all like the clip.

I also really like the last line and how it shows that Gene isn't as in control of the situation as he makes out he is.

[severinne]

Yup, that's me, completely without shame now *blushes*

Thanks you so much! Especially glad that last line did its job, you're right on the money there :)

[constance_b]

Mmmm, dirty talk. Mmmm, BDSM dirty talk.

I think I love you.

[severinne]

Aww, love you too. Thanks for reading!

[nepthys_uk]

Woo-hoo! Lovely bit of hotness here - Gene (and you!) do dirty!talk soooo well ;D

(I was going to say that this is a fab PWP, but on the other hand if I say it still fails will you write more?)

[severinne]

Hehe, thank you so much! And yeah, between a sharp kick in the arse and the sequel bunny that leapt out of a dark alley at me today, there's a rather scary possibility of writing more. Porntober isn't even halfway over yet...

[acidpenguin46]

Oh God, Gene isn't the only one with shaky breath right now. *fans self* I think I may need a quick break to recuperate as well, before I collapse onto the floor or something...

[severinne]

*fans you, brings the smelling salts for good measure*

Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it ;)