Ficathon 2008 Pinch-Hit Fic: Fallen, by jantalaimon. Brown Cortina. LoM/A2A x-over.

[jantalaimon]

TITLE: Fallen
AUTHOR: Janni
EMAIL: jantalaimon@livejournal.com
WORD COUNT: 3220
STYLE/WARNINGS/SPOILERS: Brown Cortina/Quattro. AU. Character death. Spoilers through S2.08 of LoM and for S1.01 of A2A. Het and slash which I will not specify here so as to preserve plottiness. Mild BDSM, themes and language of a sexual nature betwixt and between

Comments

[candesgirl]

Gorgeous! Annie is just not someone I put a lot of faith behind when it comes to fic, but you are seriously making me rethink that stance.

In particular I really enjoyed the bit with her and Ray and how she just knew what he'd like, what he'd need, looks like that degree really done her good ;) Also, this line: And all the while, pulling Alex in close and allowing her hands to go where they would over that slim, birdlike frame. So alike... she mused. So very alike, it's almost like.. Brilliant, right along with the end, really brilliant.

Loved it.

[jantalaimon]

Thank you! :) She's really difficult to write. I mean, I normally get really intimidated by writing Gene, but Annie is, I think, even more difficult because we see so much less of her in the show.

With the psychology degree, and the prompt as given, it just worked out like math to me. I was actually quite surprised when it was Ray who ended up paying her a visit, but it turns out my fingers knew better than my brain at that minute. XDXD

Thank you! :D

[candesgirl]

She really is intimidating to write, definitely because she isn't in the show much. Gene is intimidating in a whole different way *wink wink* yet Sam I can write till the cows come, er, home? Yeah.

Don't you love when your fingers type out something that your brain later goes "Huh, wow! Good job!" on? I know I do!

[jantalaimon]

Yeah, I have the same problem with our main three. :) Sam is just...well...he's so easy. *eg*

My fingers taking over is sometimes a very good thing indeed...as the rent-boy said to the copper! ;)

[candesgirl]

Ba-dum-dum!! LOL!!