Fic: 5 Most Memorable Cars Gene Has Driven..., green cortina, dakfinv

Aug 10, 2008 21:34


Title: The Five Most Memorable Cars Gene Has Driven (and Why They're Memorable)
Author: dak
Word Count: 906 words
Rating: green cortina
Warnings: mild angst
A/N: For

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fic, character: gene

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tinadoll August 11 2008, 01:46:26 UTC
Another good one Dak! Well written...

Was # 4 Blue by any chance?? Did it fly?

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dakfinv August 13 2008, 03:07:58 UTC
Did it fly?
Fortunately for Manchester, no. :)

Thank you!

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jean_geanie August 11 2008, 02:34:17 UTC
awww, I really love each and every one of these. Who knew cars could say so much about a guy?

the "Like father, like son." almost broke me, as did #4

and with #5 as soon as I read the words Aston Martin I instantly thought "the cheeky bastard's nicked Sam's car" and I LOVE the fact Gene prefers it to even the Cortina and I agree Sam would definitely freak out to find it missing.

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dakfinv August 13 2008, 03:08:41 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think the Aston Martin would be a Sam car. I wasn't sure if it would work or not.

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amproof August 11 2008, 02:37:52 UTC
5. Omg. Hahahahhaa!!!!

4. *stunned*

3. absolutely tragic.

2. car + love=Love

1. He didn't get hit--awesome!

Gene's life through his cars--I bet he'd tell it the same way. This was lovely, as usual. :)

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dakfinv August 13 2008, 03:09:29 UTC
Thank you so much!

(Gene would probably add a more dramatic flair to his stories. Probably mention a few cardboard boxes and women with prams.)

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dragonlit August 11 2008, 04:08:33 UTC
Brilliant stuff. You really did a great job of showing Gene's character and background through the cars. The last one was a good chuckle. Very nice!

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dakfinv August 13 2008, 03:09:49 UTC
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it. :)

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hambelandjemima August 11 2008, 04:50:26 UTC
Oh, excellent stuff, Dak. Thank you *beams*

He risked two trips around the block, then tried to park it exactly as his father had - at an angle, halfway on the pavement.
It's little touches like this that make the story so real. I can just see the Old Man leaving the car there, thinking he's parked it straight.

I thought no.3 was sad and then you hit me between the eyes with no.4. :( Fantastic writing.

No.5 - oh, Genie, you really do have a deathwish. Doesn't he realise that Sam will withold all sexual favours for a fortnight be more than a little narked? He's a right git, isn't he? Bless him *pets dvds fondly*

Thank you for writing these. I hope you had fun with the research ♥

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dakfinv August 13 2008, 03:11:24 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it!

Genie, you really do have a deathwish
I'm sure he'll think of a way to make it up to Sam. ;)

The research was fun. It would have been easier if I had Jeremy Clarkson's help.

Thank you!!

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