Comments | lifein1973: Fic: A Perfect Forever, brown cortina, by Sytaxia

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Fic: A Perfect Forever, brown cortina, by Sytaxia

Mar 14, 2008 10:45

Strong arms pinned his wrists to the bed as he was thrust, face-forward, onto the mattress. There were never any words, not during the actual act, only grunts and moans and long sighs of ecstasy. Chris felt hard, thick muscles of a well formed chest and the softening bulk of belly sliding over his back, sweat against sweat, meat against meat, ( Read more... )

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sytaxia April 1 2008, 05:42:47 UTC

Oh, thank you so much; I'm glad that Chris' desperation came through all right in this - at times, I was afraid that it was too strong, and at other times, not strong enough, so I'm really glad that it worked for you :)

fawsley March 14 2008, 20:29:01 UTC

And now you have melted my knickers.
*fneurgle*

angeweeks March 15 2008, 02:15:02 UTC

*joins faws in some good ol' fneurgling*

sytaxia April 1 2008, 05:43:22 UTC

Hee, thanks very much for the fneurgle!

sytaxia April 1 2008, 05:43:05 UTC

Hehehe, melting knickers is one of my favorite passtimes!

halotolerant March 14 2008, 20:39:34 UTC

There is just not enough really good Ray/Chris hawt so many, many cookies for you, this is fantastic! I love the sense of very physical masculinity that pervades the whole thing and the incredible feeling of longing
♥

sytaxia April 1 2008, 05:43:56 UTC

Aaah, I'm so glad that you liked this, and that the longing didn't overpower the sex - I was really worried about that.

draycevixen March 14 2008, 21:45:00 UTC

I don't hate Ray any more -- Elf wore me down *g* and the one thing I like about A2A (apart from some Gene scenery) is the Ray/Chris scenes. That said, I still don't really get the Ray love.

However, there is something here in the way you make me see him through Chris'... eyes... that really works for me.

Thank you for that! :D

sytaxia April 1 2008, 05:44:26 UTC

Oh, thank so very much; I'm very glad that Ray has grown on you!

elfbert March 14 2008, 22:56:13 UTC

Yayes! That was fantastic and HAWT! I too enjoy just how much masculinity you've packed into a short story - yay for the boys being all manly and grunting and sweating. There's not enough manly men in slash nowadays.

You should most defo write more Ray/Chris ;)

sytaxia April 1 2008, 05:45:12 UTC

Hee - I think there will definitely be more Ray/Chris in the future... In fact, I've just finished a bit of Ray/Chris in Jabberwocky, and then there's that Ray/Chris/Shaz fic in the works... So glad you liked this :)