Fic: The Kept Man (30/40), brown cortina, dak

[dakfinv]

Title: The Kept Man (30/40)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1852 this part; [55,936 overall]
Rating: brown cortina
Warnings: angst, sexual situations, swearing
Spoilers: 1.04, 1.05, 1.07, 2.08
Pairing: Sam/Warren, Sam/Gene
Summary: AU. Sam woke up with amnesia when he landed in 1973, able to only remember his name, and ended up in the grasp of Stephen Warren.

Comments

[icudoc]

Wow!
A rollercoaster of an episode!
Laughing at the Ray/Chris bit , worrying about the Shell of Sam/Nelson bit to the hopeful!Sam bit at the end.
I love it when you toy with my emotions!
*g*

[dakfinv]

Well, rollercoasters are one of my favorite things ever. :)

Thank you!

[angeweeks]

I love the banter between Chris and Ray at the beginning, and also the conversation Sam has with Nelson. It all rings so very true of their characters, you've managed to capture them perfectly through mostly dialogue alone, which is very clever.

And yay! that Sam is at least trying to remember, trying to find himself. Unfortunately I don't think it's going to be that easy for him...

[arathesane]

OMG! ICON LOVE!

[dakfinv]

Thank you! I wanted to bring a little bit of happiness to all this angst. I'm glad you liked it!

[arathesane]

another brilliant section. I particularly loved the Chris/Ray and Sam/Nelson interactions and the scene with Gene in Sam's old room. can't wait until the next bit!

[dakfinv]

Thank you! I do love Chris and Ray, but unfortunately neglect them sometimes in fic.

[jpgr]

I'll join in the chorus for the Ray/Chris and Sam/Nelson exchanges. This bit sounded very Nelson:

Nelson leaned on the bar, tossing the bar towel over his shoulder. “There’s a difference between making your own choices and doing everything on your own.” His Jamaican accent was gone, and Sam wondered how that happened, and when. “You can have people help you on your path, if you know which path to take.”

[mikes_grrl]

*icon stalking*

[dakfinv]

Thank you! I find Nelson very hard to write, harder than TCG, so I'm really happy you think it sounded like him.

[demonthief13]

I <3 Nelson

[dakfinv]

Me too. :)