Part Two

Jun 09, 2014 13:42


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aoi, kai, reita, ruki, initium novum, uruha, oasis series

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bite_to_all136 June 17 2014, 14:10:23 UTC
*waves awkwardly* Hiya there :D

I have to start off by saying I am absolute shit when it comes to leaving comments. Like, not in the sense that I don't leave them, but normally they turn into a lot of keyboard smashing & yelling, so I'm doing my best to remain calm & type something out that doesn't make me seem completely delirious :'D

I read this series back in 200- fuck I don't even remember anymore. I think it was 10'? Idk, not really important though :P ANYWAYS, even then it was always one of my favorites. I was weary to read it for a while because 90% of the time I'm put off by Aoiha, but occasionally I find an author who makes them a-okay with me and it's safe to say you definitely hold the numero uno spot for that :3 Plus, you went ahead and smashed Kai right in between them, so yeah, that makes everything all the more better :'DD (Kai's my bby, ok? :D)

When I saw you posted a new part to the series, I will not lie....I completely lost my shit. I knew there was no way I could even touch the new segment with a ten foot pole until after I re-read all the previous parts, so there went two days of me lazing around in bed & ignoring any form of social contact >:D Seriously, this series is addicting. I somehow feel almost involved with it every time I read a scene & holy shit everyone's dynamic is SO fresh.

Your Aoi is perfect. Mood swings & all, I would marry that man (and that's a lot coming from me seeing as marriage is kinda a thing I well, hate :P). I know throughout the series it almost feels as if Kai's closer with Uruha, but still, those few moments when we get Kai & Aoi alone something about their interactions just...clicks. (I am so shit at explaining, I'm so sorry lol) I seriously cannot *wait* to see how Kai confronts Aoi on their newest issue though because “ψ(`∇´)ψ I know it's gonna be goooood~. Oh, and btw, your Uruha is flawless. He's a sex crazed man who gets what he wants when he wants, there is nothing NOT to like about him :D

Kai. K a i. KAAAAAAAI. His transition, man. He went from scared, unknowing little innocent to THIS. He now knows how to properly work this relationship & it just makes me :'DD I want to award him with a medal or something for putting up with a lot of Aoi & Uruha's shit lol. All of your characters have so much depth, but I feel Kai is the one who has grown the most. Before it was almost like he just sat back & watched from the sidelines as shit hit the fan around him, but now he's not afraid to take a stand & get involved.

Ok...this comment is coming out nothing like I planned it to be, but really I just want you to know this is seriously a series I adore to pieces. You've put in so much effort & for that I am thankful. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to comment, but man....you write so well you're almost intimidating :'DD (which is a GOOD THING) This will probably be the first & last coherent comment I leave, because with future ones I will have not choice but to express my true self....which like I said before it a shit ton of caps & smashing :P

Thank you again for such a flawless series!

....oh, p.s: YOUR SMUT. I bow down to you for writing such phenomenal smut scenes. :D

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life_giver June 20 2014, 19:11:31 UTC
Heeeeelllooooo :D !!

What is with these long, AMAZING comments??! Omfg. I love it ;_______; Thank youuuuu!!

Ah, so you've been following this for a while eh? It's such an old series D: I'm glad you like what I do here. That means a lot to me, especially if you're not even an Aoiha fan taha I feel that Kai just makes it those two that much better. He belongs right in the middle of them. Kai is god.

Did you really re-read the whole series?! *salutes you* That's definitely a feat lol I tried to bring something a little new to this thing and I was hoping it wouldn't seem stale. It makes me SO SO happy to know that you could really get into the series!!! And you grasp things that I was really trying to convey...I always love that! I try so hard to pull the reader in and always wonder if I'm succeeding in any way.

This Aoi might be a difficult man to marry. I sort of believe he's more a drama queen than Uruha is here taha Just a bit less flamboyant about it. But yeah, there's obviously something about him if Kai is willing to put up with him for this long taha

Kai can be a little closer to Uruha in terms of being open and the way they're able to communicate easier than Kai and Aoi. Uruha makes things simple and blunt for Kai. It's just more difficult to figure out what Aoi is thinking and feeling because he doesn't readily offer that information to Kai. He does really confusing shit a lot of the time too without much explanation taha Kai and Aoi's relationship with each other is something wholly different than the relationship he has with Uruha, but that isn't a bad thing. Kai gets what he needs from Aoi regardless. It's why they're all in this interconnecting relationship. They all offer different things to each other and there's definitely a "click" when it comes to Kai and Aoi. I find these sorts of relationships so interesting :) Not to give anything away, but I'm enjoying working on the next part. I'm trying to bring a new view on what makes Aoi tick.

bwahaha When Uruha is around, no one leaves unsatisfied. What.

Yes!! Characters have to grow and it feels nice to see Kai become more confident. At this point he's been with these two idiots for a few years and he's learned how to cope and keep this thing working. Like with anything, you either give up on something or you make that something your bitch. Take a bow, Kai. Take a bow.

Uuugh. Your insight on this is so good. I'm not worthy of this comment. And me intimidating? tahaha I'm a fucking mouse D: Nothing at all to be intimidated by. I'm always grateful when people take the time to tell me what they're thinking (good and bad). And then I agonize on replying in a way that doesn't make me seem idiotic taha

LET YOUR TRUE SELF RUN FREE. Like I said, I'm just happy people take the time to read anything on this journal bwahaha Keysmash or coherent in-depth comment, it always makes my day :)

Thank you soooooo much for this!!!!

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