:::Runs, flies through the air and super hugs you while rolling off into a reality where Uruha and Aoi are always together::: Did I ever tell you that I love how your mind works??? Because I do!! I couldn't be happier with the way this ended. I was actually a bit concerned on how it would all turn out, but the fact that you sort of left it on a good note just without the details works with the style that the story has been written in from the beginning. I do however feel bad for Kazuki. Just the fact that he wanted something so desperately that he was willing to turn a blind eye to the reality of the situation, despite the fact that Aoi already rightfully belonged to someone else just makes me feel pity for him.
I love the angst and the inner battle that both Aoi and Uruha were struggling with, and just the way you described it in the many moments you broke it up into had an even bigger impact on me then if you were to write it all as one continuous scene. But in the end you did me very proud. Thank You so much for taking the time to explore one of my random thoughts from my very random imagination. :::Bows::: I very much look forward to your future works !!
SO SO glad you approve hon! :D Since this fic was for you! You know I was so nervous that I wasn't going to deliver. My writing tends to go off on it's own path whether I want it to or not. It's sort of hard to tame lol So I kept asking "is this what she wants? I'm probably doing something completely different than what she wanted" tahaha
Kazuki really fought hard for what he wanted, but he was barking up the wrong tree from the very beginning. What's Uruha's was going to remain Uruha's and there was going to be blood between them if challenged taha You picked the wrong one Kazuki. I wanted to draw some pity for him because he isn't evil, just a slave to the body and the body's emotions like we all are.
It was my first time to really try this sort of style, the chopped effect I call it taha I really wanted each piece to hit you in the chest a bit. Each piece had to be charged and meaningful, so if I succeeded in that, I am SO damn happy taha
But in the end you did me very proud. MISSION ACCOMPLISHED. tahaha As long as you are satisfied :)
Did I ever tell you that I love how your mind works??? Because I do!! I couldn't be happier with the way this ended. I was actually a bit concerned on how it would all turn out, but the fact that you sort of left it on a good note just without the details works with the style that the story has been written in from the beginning. I do however feel bad for Kazuki. Just the fact that he wanted something so desperately that he was willing to turn a blind eye to the reality of the situation, despite the fact that Aoi already rightfully belonged to someone else just makes me feel pity for him.
I love the angst and the inner battle that both Aoi and Uruha were struggling with, and just the way you described it in the many moments you broke it up into had an even bigger impact on me then if you were to write it all as one continuous scene. But in the end you did me very proud.
Thank You so much for taking the time to explore one of my random thoughts from my very random imagination. :::Bows:::
I very much look forward to your future works !!
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Kazuki really fought hard for what he wanted, but he was barking up the wrong tree from the very beginning. What's Uruha's was going to remain Uruha's and there was going to be blood between them if challenged taha You picked the wrong one Kazuki. I wanted to draw some pity for him because he isn't evil, just a slave to the body and the body's emotions like we all are.
It was my first time to really try this sort of style, the chopped effect I call it taha I really wanted each piece to hit you in the chest a bit. Each piece had to be charged and meaningful, so if I succeeded in that, I am SO damn happy taha
But in the end you did me very proud. MISSION ACCOMPLISHED. tahaha As long as you are satisfied :)
Thank you hon!!
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