Comments | life_fic: The Texture of Persimmons (Charlie gen, G)

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The Texture of Persimmons (Charlie gen, G)

Oct 12, 2008 22:49

Title: The Texture of Persimmons
Fandom: Life
Rating: G
Characters: Charlie, Jennifer, Bobby, Ted, Constance
Summary: My mother said every persimmon has a sun inside, something golden, glowing, warm as my face.
Disclaimer: Life definitely doesn't belong to me.
Author's Notes: Spoilers for the pilot. Thanks go out to firebubbles310 for beta-reading this for me. ( Read more... )

Comments 8

mostepotente October 13 2008, 05:25:22 UTC

Love this. So very nice, and sweet-sad. I like the comparison to LA like a banquet and all the detail you put into Charlie's last meal with Jen.

cinaed October 15 2008, 01:57:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) And yeah, the LA like a banquet sentence is my favorite.

citosol October 13 2008, 12:02:59 UTC

yes, a bitter-sweet story! I loved the idea of the "triad" remembered, half-remembered, forgotten...

cinaed October 15 2008, 01:57:58 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

artic_fox October 13 2008, 21:48:05 UTC

This is wonderful. I haven't seen this particular part of Charlie's life in fic very often, but you have captured it brilliantly. Well done.

cinaed October 15 2008, 01:59:15 UTC

Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Charlie's life before and during prison fascinates me, so I'm really pleased to hear you thought I captured it well. :)

rose_griffes October 13 2008, 23:14:28 UTC

Nicely done, I really enjoyed this.

cinaed October 15 2008, 01:59:47 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :)