Fic | GK | what you are and who i'll be for you

Feb 13, 2010 21:59

Generation Kill | Brad/Nate | R

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writing, gk

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zippitgood February 13 2010, 20:49:47 UTC
Mmmmmmmmmm...so utterly hot and delicious!

You've captured Ray and Brad and Nate wonderfully.

Thanks for sharing and hope to see more! :D

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lickingbeads February 14 2010, 14:21:47 UTC
Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked it ^^

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ruggerdavey February 13 2010, 21:05:18 UTC
Jesus Christ, Nate Fick has turned him into a fucking poetry-filled grade-A homosexual cliché. And Brad can't even make himself mind.

Haha. I loved this line. In fact, I really loved this whole fic. Very in character and hot to boot. Nice.

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lickingbeads February 14 2010, 14:22:14 UTC
Aw, thank you so much!

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trying_t0_be February 13 2010, 21:09:38 UTC
huh... *is dead*

I like it very much.

Thanks for sharing. <3

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lickingbeads February 14 2010, 14:23:16 UTC
Thank you! ^___^

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schlicky February 13 2010, 21:21:34 UTC
Yum. This was wooooooonderful - the silent yearning and wanting and hot sex on the floor. Delightful. :D Thanks for sharing!

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lickingbeads February 14 2010, 14:24:11 UTC
I'm glad it worked for you :p Thank you!

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emerald_skies February 13 2010, 21:34:44 UTC
Oh. Oh my. *fans self*

Nate's eyes flash with heat. It's all the confirmation Brad needs right now, to know he didn't imagine the tension in their interactions throughout the tour, or, fuck, since day one, since meeting his LT and shaking his hand and from then on trying to navigate between giving this CO everything he had and trying not to think of his mouth while jacking off.

Loved this part and the one below the best

Brad sees it all even as he feels Nate still clothed in his arms, and his muscles are already trembling from the frenzied excitement and the fucking pathetic joy and will never be up to the task of holding up their combined weight this first time.

D'aww, Brad's kindof a closet romantic. I love it! Also loved Ray calling Brad out on his bullshit. Very IC, looking forward to seeing more from you :)

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lickingbeads February 14 2010, 14:25:24 UTC
Whew, I'm so glad to hear you found it to be IC! Thank you for such a sweet comment ^^

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