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Jan 20, 2011 15:57

Generation Kill | Brad/Nate, Ray/Nate | PG15

The research is obviously fucking with my brain bigtime, because this too is just... weird & uncalled-for. And also another one of those 'proceed at your own risk' things.

( Zero-three-hundred, 1130 words )

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I took the cliché way out, but: kubis January 20 2011, 17:13:45 UTC

One of the things that can happen next:

Fuck.

He tries not to fall out of the Humvee, but he's not sure he succeeds. Probably not. His grip on the door is almost painful, but that helps a little. He gritts out "I'm going to go and check" and pretends Ray doesn't moan on the other side of the vehicle.

The sand is slippery like it hasn't been for weeks. But Brad is fucking Recon and he can fucking crawl on the bottom of the ocean with a hard-on. He can do it.

He passes the berm and sees him. Not much to see, to be honest, because Nate's turned away, but the motion of his hand is quite obvious. Brad swallows the moan that wants to escape his mouth. His dick is so hard, it's leaking already without anybody touching it.

Nate lets out a quiet moan of his own and he tilts his head just so. And Brad knows that in reality he can hardly see anything, but his imagination is working full force. In his mind, he’s right behind Nate, his nose in Nate’s hair, inhaling deep, his hands gripping Nate’s hips and he’s pushing his cock between Nate’ ( ... )

Re: I took the cliché way out, but: lickingbeads January 20 2011, 17:17:41 UTC

AWW GOD; YES. Must be not be terrible cliché when you managed to surprise me. Oh jesus how wonderful this is.

But Brad is fucking Recon and he can fucking crawl on the bottom of the ocean with a hard-on.
AND I HONEST TO GOD BURST OUT LAUGHING, HERE, RIGHT BEFORE IT GOT HOT AS FUCK. YOU SO WIN, BB.

Re: I took the cliché way out, but: kubis January 20 2011, 18:56:11 UTC

HA, thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :D I decided to go with a dream, because a) it explains Brad's behaviour, b) I'm not a fan of them hooking up in Iraq, c) I'M A HOPELESS SHIPPER THAT NEEDS HER BRAD/NATE TOGETHER FOREVER. I mean. Yes.

Re: I took the cliché way out, but: bgaleb January 20 2011, 19:59:56 UTC

And of course they live together happily ever after, just by sheer will of our minds!!

Re: I took the cliché way out, but: alasse January 20 2011, 17:31:13 UTC

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Oh, oh, EPIC way out, totally not cliché! My favorite part (beause I am SUCH a schmoop-addict) was 'THEIR BED IN DC' because OF COURSE they are living together and there are many great domestic shennanigans.

Re: I took the cliché way out, but: kubis January 20 2011, 19:18:51 UTC

When it comes to Brad/Nate, I am totally schmoopy. THEY ARE JUST MEANT TO BE. TOGETHER. LIVING TOGETHER HAPPILY EVER AFTER.

Re: I took the cliché way out, but: idrilka January 20 2011, 22:08:19 UTC

Well, it may be a cliche in the sense: "yeah, and then it all turned out to be a dream", but at the same time you managed to surprise me, too. So, you know, I wouldn't worry about that too much.

And, just saying, I loved that little bit of domesticity at the end. ♥

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