Fic: Masks

[entangled_now]

Title: Masks
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None, set mid season 2
Warnings: Suggestively dark
Disclaimer: In no way mine or anything to do with me. I own nothing.
Summary: The state of trust in Torchwood was shaky to begin with.
AN: 'We're all going to die' cliche, for cliche_bingo

Comments

[dimestore_romeo]

I love this. I like the detachment and the cold clinical nature of it, and I love that the audience isn't quite immersed in Ianto's point of view. I really love that, for the audience, the identity of the shapeshifter is left slightly ambiguous.

<3

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I wasn't sure whether the distance and the ambiguity at the end would work or not. So I'm really pleased that you liked it.

Thank you for reading.

[butterflycell]

oh my god... that was truely nerve wracking! And you didn't let us know what happened?!?! But it was fabulous - i agree with the coldness and the clinical feel to it all - it was fabulous!

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I really wanted to leave it undecided at the end so I'm pleased it worked for you.

[master_kogane]

Very atmospheric, and I just love the end!

[entangled_now]

Thank you so much :D I'm glad the end worked for you.

[morgia]

Hooo wow, really good!!! Bravo "!

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it :)

[frostheavens]

I don't watch Torchwood, but I know enough to understand this and I think it's amazing. I adore the sense of tension, and how detached it is. I also like the way you didn't spell things out at the end, so we can make up our won minds. Great job ♥

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I really wanted the tension to work so I'm pleased you thought it did, and to leave everything a little bit uncertain at the end, I thought that would be appropriately brittle. I'm glad you liked it.