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Fic: The First Dance

Nov 07, 2008 14:40

Title: The First Dance
Author: Corona
Fandom: Merlin
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: In no way mine or anything to do with me. I own nothing.
Summary: "I don't think I'm built for dancing," Merlin said carefully. "I'm fairly sure I don't have enough legs."
AN: Written for emony2 using the prompt 'Arthur teaches Merlin how to dance,' since the ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, word count: 1500-3000, merlin, genre: slash, merlin: arthur/merlin

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entangled_now November 7 2008, 17:13:53 UTC

Thank you very much! I had a lot of fun on the dialogue for this :D

louiex November 7 2008, 15:51:02 UTC

Oh you posted Merlin fic! Huzzah~ And it's so them, Arthur making it seem like it's some horrible ordeal when it was his idea in the first place :D

Excellent fic~

entangled_now November 7 2008, 17:15:55 UTC

I did! It's great fun to have some prompts for it. Merlin keeps luring me in with its magic and its unashamed slashiness.

Arthur making it seem like it's some horrible ordeal when it was his idea in the first place

That's just Arthur all the way through, so much love!

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

clearillusion November 7 2008, 15:58:55 UTC

Awww, that was adorable ^.^

entangled_now November 7 2008, 17:16:14 UTC

Thank you very much :D

hils November 7 2008, 16:21:03 UTC

That was just wonderful. Very in character

entangled_now November 7 2008, 17:16:57 UTC

Thank you! I'm really pleased the boys worked for you.

neptuneskisses November 7 2008, 16:22:56 UTC

There isn't compulsory dancing is there?

Arrgh, that's brought up horrible memories of 'music and movement' classes at school! :-D I'm right there with Merlin - dancing is scary! Very funny and cute fic!

entangled_now November 7 2008, 17:19:04 UTC

Compulsory dancing is an evil thing, which leads to dancing unhappiness and bad coordination and sometimes embarrassment. Though maybe Merlin wouldn't object to more lessons?

Thank you :)

neptuneskisses November 7 2008, 17:29:35 UTC

Though maybe Merlin wouldn't object to more lessons?

I'm sure he'd think it was well worth it! Especially if Arthur has the same take on giving lessons as Jack Harkness does when he's teaching *target practice' :-D Go for it Arthur!

entangled_now November 7 2008, 18:58:12 UTC

Yes, I will put forward my vote for lessons with as much sexual tension as the target practice scene from Torchwood. Poor uptight, frustrated Arthur, what's he got to lose.