Fic: Personal Space

May 22, 2008 11:48

Title: Personal Space
Fandom: NCIS
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Gibbs/Tony
Disclaimer: In no way mine or anything to do with me. I own nothing.
Summary: "Are you physically incapable of saying no to me, DiNozzo?"
AN: Huge thank you to sarren for the beta
Personal Space )

ncis, rating: pg-13, ncis: tony/gibbs, word count: 1500-3000, genre: slash

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emony2 May 22 2008, 11:41:35 UTC
Huh.

I'm not quite sure what to think of this one. I think I liked it. I'm not quite sure I should have done.

I know it fits them both so well.

Huh.

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entangled_now May 22 2008, 12:44:42 UTC
I apparently couldn't resist taking these two in a slightly messed up direction.

I'm really glad it fits though! I was trying to get close to the tone of the show even if I was tempted to veer in a slightly wrong direction....

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emony2 May 22 2008, 13:18:13 UTC
*grins* somehow I think that slightly messed up wouldn't even begin to describe them if they ever did happen ;)

Yup - tone of the show was definitely there.

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entangled_now May 22 2008, 16:27:29 UTC
I know it's the sort of relationship that has the potential to sneak up and sneak up and then just explode everywhere! (Though I'll admit that I'd quite like to watch it do that.

:D

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entangled_now May 22 2008, 12:45:32 UTC
Thank you, I think I was definitely aiming for 'slightly messed up' but still in character so I'm really glad you though so.

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kelly_girl May 22 2008, 12:25:21 UTC
Very nice. Loved Tony's inability to say no and how it didn't even occur to him until Gibbs kept pressing and pressing and even then he's still about what Gibbs wants. Like if Gibbs had wanted him to say yes, or say happy birthday he'd have said that instead of no.

Tony so beautifully messed up and Gibbs, so willing to exploit that.

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entangled_now May 22 2008, 12:52:17 UTC
Thank you, I love the idea that Tony just lets him push and push and doesn't even really notices until he makes it blatant and he still has trouble saying no. I couldn't resist playing with the idea.

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adafrog May 22 2008, 12:42:38 UTC
Wow. So messed up, but hot.

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entangled_now May 22 2008, 12:54:55 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.

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entangled_now May 22 2008, 16:32:06 UTC
Thank you, I'm really glad you thought so.

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