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Fic: A Little Competition, Part Two

Oct 31, 2010 08:52

Title: A Little Competition, Part Two
Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Rating: R
Word Count: 18,000
Disclaimer: In no way mine, or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: "Still, John, a ghost story at Halloween, during a power cut, in a thunderstorm. The terribly predictable cliche of it all." Sherlock slides down in the chair until his ( Read more... )

sherlock, sherlock: john/sherlock, genre: slash, rated: adult, rating: r, word count: 10000-50000

Comments 32

pandarus October 31 2010, 11:49:01 UTC

Oh my God, I am enjoying this SO VERY MUCH!!!

::scurries on to next part::

entangled_now October 31 2010, 14:12:57 UTC

Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed it :D

cantseethesky October 31 2010, 14:56:18 UTC

Eeeeeeeeee exciting!!! On to the next part!!! LOVING it!!!

One small, insy, tinsy pedantic thing that's just bugging me.... James Philimore was the name of the teenager in A Study in Pink who went back for his umbrella and was one of the taxi murderer's victims, so John would've recognized the name.... but meh yours is a better interpretation of the canon xDDD <3<3

entangled_now October 31 2010, 15:04:29 UTC

Why thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Lol, I missed that they re-used the name in new canon, damn them. In the original canon James Phillimore disappeared without a trace exactly like this and Sherlock never solved the mystery. I couldn't resist solving it for him :D

mushroom18 October 31 2010, 16:31:54 UTC

Let me just say that Sherlock is SUCH a bitch in this series, lol

Also, this is riveting!

entangled_now October 31 2010, 17:25:36 UTC

Lol! So true, I love when he's being sulky and petulant and possessive.

THANK YOU!

darthhellokitty October 31 2010, 17:04:10 UTC

Ooooh, what an extremely creepy story!!! I have an urge to start searching our house for traps...

entangled_now October 31 2010, 17:26:16 UTC

Thank you, I'm happy you thought so. Mwahahahaha! Man traps, every house should have some.

dirtyzucchini October 31 2010, 20:45:13 UTC

One thing John and I have in common: we think that Mycroft doing things is bizarre. :)

That sentence made me laugh out loud, and the whole story so far is brilliantly written and so much fun.

Can't wait for Sherlock's story, on to the next part!

entangled_now November 1 2010, 07:27:44 UTC

Lol, it's very strange imagining him doing ordinary things, but he must, he must! lol.

I'm glad you liked it.