Something a little... hmm...
This one is written from a different perspective. Not sure I've tried first person before and would appreciate any feedback.
Together
I move slowly, eyes fixed firmly on your face. I’m probably moving too slowly, but you don’t seem to mind. If anything, I think you’re enjoying the slow pace, a change to our usual fare.
You run your fingers through my hair and smile at me, letting me know it’s okay, you’re okay, we’re okay before your eyes close and you inhale sharply. I immediately stop all forward movement. My heart pounds and I begin to withdraw, but you have other ideas. Your legs tighten around me and a whispered ‘please’ is all it takes before I’m filling you completely
Together
I move slowly, eyes fixed firmly on your face. I’m probably moving too slowly, but you don’t seem to mind. If anything, I think you’re enjoying the slow pace, a change to our usual fare.
You run your fingers through my hair and smile at me, letting me know it’s okay, you’re okay, we’re okay before your eyes close and you inhale sharply. I immediately stop all forward movement. My heart pounds and I begin to withdraw, but you have other ideas. Your legs tighten around me and a whispered ‘please’ is all it takes before I’m filling you completely