Lyrics
I need some advice on the Lyrics I wrote, so far people like them, hope you do too.
"Hometown"
Fell in love in my hometown,
we had our ups, we had our downs
but we managed to stay on the ground.
Thought I was already down but then
I got, got shot down, shot down in my hometown.
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
we cannot be apart,
rip my heart into two,
I only want you.
Too far, the way we are
so close, I want you the most
you all, I ever held close
lets make the most
of everything we hold dear,
for it might disapear
We must endure this bad weather to be together.
This life is so hard
to be far apart,
your in my heart forever,
dotn ever go away,
your my only way to get by,
please drop by,
talk about you and I,
we can never die as long as we try.
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
we cannot be apart,
rip my heart into two,
I only want you, I only want you.
Too far, the way we are
so close, I want you the most
you all, I ever held close
lets make the most
of everything we hold dear,
for it might disapear.
Fell in love in my hometown,
nothing could bring me down,
little place to make most of whats held close.
I found a reason to breath,
its a diseise,
held me above,
its known as love.
In the end I was shot down, shot down,
tear it all, all away, go away,
why must it end this way?
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
we cannot be apart,
rip my heart into two,
I only want you, I only want you.
Too far, the way we are
so close, I want you the most
you all, I ever held close
lets make the most
of everything we hold dear,
for it might disapear.
Shot down in my home town,
little place to hide my disgrace.
Now I have to travel this road alone,
for what you have torn,
I wanted to be your own, your own.
Fell in love in my hometown
nothing could bring me down.
We had our ups, we had our downs,
we managed to stay on the ground
but I got, got shot down, shot down in my hometown.
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
the best part.
Too far, the way we are,
so close, I want you the most,
your all, I ever held close,
we should of made the most
of everything we held dear,
why did it have to disapear,
disapear~~~~disapear~~~~~((fade))
-END-
There ya go....any advice or constructive critisim...((you can only give that if you know what it is, lol)) will be appriciated.
"Hometown"
Fell in love in my hometown,
we had our ups, we had our downs
but we managed to stay on the ground.
Thought I was already down but then
I got, got shot down, shot down in my hometown.
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
we cannot be apart,
rip my heart into two,
I only want you.
Too far, the way we are
so close, I want you the most
you all, I ever held close
lets make the most
of everything we hold dear,
for it might disapear
We must endure this bad weather to be together.
This life is so hard
to be far apart,
your in my heart forever,
dotn ever go away,
your my only way to get by,
please drop by,
talk about you and I,
we can never die as long as we try.
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
we cannot be apart,
rip my heart into two,
I only want you, I only want you.
Too far, the way we are
so close, I want you the most
you all, I ever held close
lets make the most
of everything we hold dear,
for it might disapear.
Fell in love in my hometown,
nothing could bring me down,
little place to make most of whats held close.
I found a reason to breath,
its a diseise,
held me above,
its known as love.
In the end I was shot down, shot down,
tear it all, all away, go away,
why must it end this way?
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
we cannot be apart,
rip my heart into two,
I only want you, I only want you.
Too far, the way we are
so close, I want you the most
you all, I ever held close
lets make the most
of everything we hold dear,
for it might disapear.
Shot down in my home town,
little place to hide my disgrace.
Now I have to travel this road alone,
for what you have torn,
I wanted to be your own, your own.
Fell in love in my hometown
nothing could bring me down.
We had our ups, we had our downs,
we managed to stay on the ground
but I got, got shot down, shot down in my hometown.
When did this start?
it was getting to the best part,
the best part.
Too far, the way we are,
so close, I want you the most,
your all, I ever held close,
we should of made the most
of everything we held dear,
why did it have to disapear,
disapear~~~~disapear~~~~~((fade))
-END-
There ya go....any advice or constructive critisim...((you can only give that if you know what it is, lol)) will be appriciated.