Shattered Beneath Your Fingers (Part 3)

[lezzerlee]

Author's notes: This is a companion story to The Consequences of Trust a.k.a. Eames POV.
Beta(s): queenofinfinite and space_raider182
Disclaimer: This story/artwork is based on characters and situations created and owned by the Christopher Nolan and Warner Bros. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended. They are not mine,

Comments

[spock74]

More!yay!

This is breaking my heart. You are just prolonging this to torture us, and I love it. The tension is there, the slow burn of Arthur's collapse and I'm just eating it all up. I don't know what that says about the content of my character, but who cares when this story is out there just eating my brain. I'd say hurry up with more but I don't want it to end, so take as long as you like. But do hurry. Or don't. I don't know. I know I'm rambling but it's 3 in the morning and this story is just so good.

[lezzerlee]

Thank you so much. I thinks it's almost done. I think. I don't know.

And it what does it say about my character that after I write my help_japan fic, I'm probably going to kill Arthur again for another kink prompt?

I'm sick. We can be sick together.

[spock74]

I think you should make killing Arthur your specialty. You are so very, very good at it.

[osaki_nana_707]

I don't really know what to say. :P It's just so good.

You did use the name Weiss in place of Wild once or twice though, and you might wanna fix that before it confuses people. ;)

[lezzerlee]

Thanks! I caught a couple, I should have picked more contrasting names, but Wild is the name of a famous thief.

[evillunatic]

What is it with this fandom and awesome WIPs?

Went back and read the first fic and got hooked instantly. Arthur's slow decent into madness, his feeling of betrayal, how both of them know each other so well, and yet completely misreading one another, and the overall grittyness of the fics? *flails* Ok I'm gonna stop since I can go on and on about all the things I'm loving about this verse(?) and it'll probably go into tl;dr territory *goes and waits patiently for the next part*.

Also went back and read the dub-con fic... can I just say UMF

[lezzerlee]

Thank you so much. And this fandom has AMAZING authors.

I used to read solely POTC and it's all I was really ever used to, and a lot of the time the fic was bad.

Then I got into this fandom and was just blown away by how almost all of the fic is really really well written, or at least extremely engaging, thought provoking, or just plain hot!

I'm flattered that you consider my writing good because this is the first fandom I've ever written for, and I hadn't written anything besides a comic for class years ago.

[evillunatic]

Tell me about. I tried reading some fic from my other fandom and it just doesn't compare to the ones here *forever spoiled orz*

Really? Well you've done an awesome job even it has been that long. :D

[sho_no_tabi]

You know I just re-read this whole thing and I have to tell you: I think you can't kill Arthur because you already have Eames saving him at the beginning of both POVs, right? Hehe. At least, that's what I'm thinking of. It sounds like the juiciest kind of h/c that I love, at any rate.

Eagerly awaiting more, as always!

(EFF YOU, LJ. I tried to post this five times and it won't let me!)

[lezzerlee]

LJ has been awful lately due the that attack a few days ago. I was freaking out because I couldn't get my fave WIPS to load.

Thanks so much!

[unvarnishedtale]

Oh, I do love it when they're broken. I don't even know if I want Eames to save Arthur or not, now...

[lezzerlee]

Save is a relative term. ;)