Torch (1/?)

[lexiesloan]

Title: Torch (1/?)
Author: lexisloan
Rating: M
Pairing: Kelly Severide/Elise Mills
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.

Summary: I have only got one burning desire.

This was supposed to be a one-shot. It obviously didn't work out that way. I'm always so nervous dipping my toe into a new fandom.

Comments

[livingdoll216]

YAY!!! I was so excited when I saw this. You have made me fall in love with another ship and if this ends badly it's all your fault lol.

I feel so bad for Elise, this does look bad on Kelly's side of things. He just broke up with Renee and now he's sleeping with Elise, and yes he likes her, but she doesn't know that.

I love Shay, she knows exactly what he did wrong and she's pissed at him too :)

I love the explanation you gave for why Kelly backed off, it makes sense messing with Peter's sister could cause a lot of tension at the station and Kelly just didn't really want to go through that again.

I was so glad he went to the diner and tried to set things straight. I'm so happy this will be more than a one shot! I can't wait to see what happens on their date. Now I'm off to read this again :)

[lexiesloan]

Oh, thank god this turned out alright. I have been writing Mark/Lexie for so long, I was worried that when I began writing this, it would just be like that and that's not what I wanted at all - even if Mark and Kelly are a lot alike.

I was thinking. He has already gotten together with one sister of a fellow firefighter and we still have to see how that went but we all know it didn't end well. He really likes Elise but as we have said before, he loves being a fireman and he respects that "code". He wasn't able to help himself anymore though.

Elise is shy and a little drawn back but when she's with Kelly, he definitely brings something out of her and he gets a kick out of seeing it. She is going to be a bit hesitant around him for quite some time :)

THANK YOU so much for reading and encouraging me with this.

[livingdoll216]

I'm just so in love with this show right now and with Kelly/Elise. There seems to be no stories for them and it makes me sad.

I can't wait to find out more about about these two. I think Elsie would definitely be hesitant at first for a lot of reasons. Her and Kelly have the potential to be very complicated lol.

[lexiesloan]

I was getting very frustrated because I can't find an icon of her. She has a very small part in the fandom but I'm hoping that will change. I just hope she and Kelly don't break my heart.

[livingdoll216]

I just keep hoping that she'll show up soon. Since they're bringing up Kelly's past with another firefighter's sister may be that will lead to Elise. I know it's wishful thinking but I need to believe all the little flirting was leading somewhere.

[lexiesloan]

It had to be leading somewhere. It just had to. I know this show will ultimately disappoint me as all shows do but so far, I have faith that the writers wouldn't do something so blatant if they didn't have plans for it.

[livingdoll216]

I went through the Elise tag and I saw someone say that a writer has alluded that they are going somewhere with Kelly/Elise, I don't know if it's true but I really hope so.

[lexiesloan]

Oh god, don't tell me things like that lol I'm already imagining the next smut scene between these two.

[livingdoll216]

I don't want to get excited but Renee's gone now and Kelly's starting to get his shit together and I can't help myself lol.

[lexiesloan]

I have so many things in my head that I want to happen on this show and in the story. The only thing that worries me - they hook up so early on the show, they are going to end soon, too.

[livingdoll216]

That's my thing too, it's why I'm okay with them taking their time. Because look at Renee, that happened so freaking fast and now she's gone, I don't want that to happen with them.

[lexiesloan]

Ugh. Renee. She was just terrible though. I'm worried they are going to have Kelly stay the manwhore of the show. Look at Mark on Grey's. Even after he got with Lexie, Shonda felt a man on the show HAD to be the whore because he show couldn't last without one.

[livingdoll216]

Peter Mills can be the new manwhore of the show. After Dawson breaks his heart he'll probably be the next Kelly lol

[lexiesloan]

Ugh. They are making Dawson/Casey OTP and shoving it down our throats of how perfect they are together and poor bb Mills :(

[livingdoll216]

After my rewatch I finally realized what I don't like about Dawson, it's how she acts with Hallie, Casey's fiancee. She is so childish and weird around her, Dawson and Casey have never dated, she has no claim to him, which is why I find her attitude towards Hallie so odd.

[lexiesloan]

I don't want to hate Dawson because despite how I act, I don't want to hate women on predominantly male shows but with Dawson, they're writing her bordering on being a Mary Sue. She's perfect in every way.