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lexa_red December 13 2010, 19:45:16 UTC
OMG Thanx :D!!! *sigh of relief* I know it was extremely intense and I dug extremely deep for each of them...so they better appreciate it lol. I gotta admit that I do feel kinda proud of this chapter partially because I shocked myself with some parts and revelations of it.

D/K are beautiful to me. They’re complicated in a rebellious and honest way and even I don’t fully understand them as much as I’d like to. They just do their own thing. Although I think Dahlia likes having this intense power and control over Kahlan (one that Cara can‘t match), she really does have fluffy feelings for her.

LOL you remembered my nightmare!! It was so vivid, I just knew I had to include it somewhere. I liked seeing Dahlia ultra vulnerable with Kahlan. I’m sure she used to be that way with Cara and misses it

Denna’s neck moment- UNF! I can understand Snake here, lol. I mean, really the girl has such a sexy neck!!!! Wtf. It is absolutely criminal to be that beautiful :P

Wow, how she snaked through the Denna’s childhood memories and twisted everything once again! <333! Snake’s been on my mind a lot…like a lot! I studied her the best I could in ‘Broken’ and I gave her a lot of thought. I tried to really connect with her and it was, of course, difficult and disturbing but I think that both Cara and Denna would still think of their Mistress with some regard and respect, if not love. She played such an intricate role in their lives, arguably more than their mothers, and so she would know to break Denna with words and bargains, not with violence. How degrading for Denna to be her pet omg.

The closet XD Glad you liked. It’s sorta sick but it occurred to me while I opened the towel closet at the Temple and had an urge to hide in there. So I imagine they were probably "stored" somewhere if Snake wanted some alone time and didn’t feel like bringing them all the way down to a dungeon. I thought of ‘Descrated’ and Cara’s self-sacrificing plight and I thought maybe they would’ve went through something similar in childhood cuz she seemed pretty sure of what she had to do. I definitely think Snake would teach those sort of lesson...mix in philosophy with abuse. Awww yeah, Dahlia protected Denna with her silence.

DR has to die I want to bathe in his black fucking blood! YES! Lol! Plus, after what he did to Dahlia back then and forgetting about her?! He sucks.

hehe thanks about my icon. My friend made it and Cara looks so dangerous, even in pink!

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areader221 December 14 2010, 00:34:16 UTC
Yep, D/K are beautiful! Dahlia is areal Mistress, she cares and loves her pet and she controls her 100%. Where Cara is kinda lousy and she doesn't care much and for her a life or death of a pet means nothing at all.

Of course I remember your nightmare! I always tend to dislike a vivid dreams, lol, for me they are sign of some inner trouble with falling addition it made me worried then. Still, you masterfully incorporated it into the fic! Also, I like an idea that Dahlia misses being vulnerable with Cara. I'm sure if she would dream it several years ago it would have been Snake on Cara's place and Cara-on Kahlan's.

Wtf. It is absolutely criminal to be that beautiful :P LOL! so true!!!

Snake was there just a few moments in one episode but you did such a marvelous research and a lot of thinking! I mean, she has that body filled with blood and became a breathing, scorching living creature! Amazing! I feel her... My heart aches a lot for Denna she is so smart and strong and doesn't care but she is easy to be manipulated cuz she is lonely and wants to feel and understand feelings.

The closet, lol! It is actually sick but I'm a freak you remember that, right? I loooved it! And how you came to that idea? <3<3<3!!!!
You really are one of the sickest bears ever, lol! And of course 'Desecrated' who would forget THAT! I like your idea that Cara had done something similar before! Of course for Dahlia! With her breathing problems! So awesome! And Dahlia protecting mean Denna - heart it forever!

Lol, Cara looks dangerous in pink or yellow or all other existing colors! XD

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lexa_red December 14 2010, 03:33:34 UTC
:D I think you're so right about the difference between Cara and Dahlia as Mistresses. I was just thinking maybe Cara doesn't want any other "pet" besides Dahlia loving her and that's why she doesn't love them either. idk?
I'll give it some more thought and probably touch upon in the next part

I'm sure if she would dream it several years ago it would have been Snake on Cara's place and Cara-on Kahlan's I think so too. I think Dahlia probably knows that too...and still, it's so sad how things can evolve like that. At least Cara can admit that some things have changed

I mean, she has that body filled with blood and became a breathing, scorching living creature! Wow this is such an intense compliment, I love it alot :D She was so eager to come forward and take control like that. Like whoa. I really relate to how you're seeing Denna and it's so similiar to how I feel about her too.

You really are one of the sickest bears ever, lol! *bows* thank u, thank u XD

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areader221 December 16 2010, 00:30:34 UTC
That's an excellent point! Cara doesn't want other pets! But I think she needs some. Cuz she demands from Mistress Dahlia too much. To be a pet and a Mistress, like, all the time. I think it's kinda exhausting for Dahlia. Yeah, very interesting thought.
Especially knowing that Cara is far not a monogamous type of girl.
Is it a laziness or she just doesn't care?

I feel all your heroes and heroines very much. They all are very impressive and full of life. Now I warming myself to Kahlan also, lol, I know, she is one of major heroine's but somehow I didn't like her occasionally (maybe cuz she was a cause of C/D trouble, lol, idk). That's why I like my bear! You create such vivid characters! When I think about them I want only DR's death, haha. I could let Snake live even she tortured my fav girls. I can forgive her. I think. Maybe.

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lexa_red December 19 2010, 06:03:17 UTC
Is it a laziness or she just doesn't care? I think, for the most part, she just doesn't care. I think she was able to invest her feelings, emotions, time and effort into one person and that's it. But now we'll see...

That's why I like my bear! You create such vivid characters! Awww thank u. Oh Kahlan can be totally annoying, I'm the first one to admit that :D

oh forgiveness for Snake...lol epic

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areader221 December 19 2010, 23:22:13 UTC
oh forgiveness for Snake...lol epic
I know but I think I can forgive her and anyone basically who became evil not by the own choice. I am completely confident that some people choose to be bad and evil, they enjoy it better. But Snake was pushed into that kind of life and yes, she enjoys it now. But if she would be given a freedom tomorrow and would continue to do evil deeds then I will be merciless to her. Or she can find another job and I will spare her life without big moral pretenses.

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