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areader221 November 21 2010, 00:40:17 UTC
Finding Dahlia. Lexa! That was another heart wrenching scene.
Funny how Cara was gasping and pulling Kahlan away from a cliff, hehe. She still didn’t get over K’s death. Feelings!Cara!

She would’ve done anything not to be left behind in that moment, and she counted herself fortunate that Mistress Cara was extremely versed and knowledgeable about the depths of dependency. Wow, it’s true! Poor pets become nonfunctional by themselves!

The clouds moved mockingly above them, blocking out the north star, the half moon and forcing them closer together. Cool image! Like something scary is going to happen.

She tugged Kahlan behind her loosely, more like a child’s toy, setting the speed faster than she was physically capable of moving. She had to know. Her mind grew wild and dark with ideas. Maybe Dahlia had been captured by whoever slept in that lonely place, or she had gone in an entirely different direction altogether and this would cost her valuable time. She didn’t feel like Dahlia was close. So she ran even harder. As they approached the steps, Cara released Kahlan and in one terrifying kick, Cara had the door pounded down and her Agiel in hand.
Loooved it! My heart was thumping hard! Cara with one evil eye and another frightened, awesome!

She saw a tiny ponytail, Dahlia’s perfect color, on a pillow, attached to a motionless head turned away from her, towards a window. Blood soaked the bed in which she laid in and the thin blankets that inadequately covered her.
Lol, I knew it’s wasn’t the end but still I felt a chill going through me. I should read your fic during day not at night time. Then probably I’ll feel more relaxed :)

Cara slammed her eyes shut, convinced it was a dream, pleading for some evidence that this could all be a lie. Maybe if she only stood in the doorway, this room would disappear and replace itself with a room in which Dahlia was alive and smiling and running towards her, elated arms outstretched. Oh, baby Cara!

Then I finally fell in love with Kahlan, lol! Where did this whiny girl disappear? Kahlan became an action hero, she loves she Mistress but her head is cool enough to act.
I completely get the paralyzed Cara! What she saw was too much to handle! I like when Cara loses her cool and becomes vulnerable as she basically is. I just love too much a woobie!Cara!

When Kahlan dumped Cara onto Dahlia was such a delightful and adorable moment! The Mighty Shorty dumped on a bed like a weightless puppy!!!

Cara clutched Dahlia with white knuckles, and buried her head into her, letting out the single most violent, guttural and despairing cry of her life. All the sounds that she had produced over the years while in the grips of incensed torture were nothing but mild whispers compared to this scream and this pain. For the first time, she knew what real pain was. It was all over. Honestly? You shook me up here again! I cried a little more. I’m really getting old and sentimental, fuck…

She could do nothing except lay where Kahlan had placed her and wait for the same fate to claim her. Cara closed her eyes, as her eyelids grew unsure of how to continue functioning, and, with her lips still pressed to Dahlia, she felt something in the palm of her hand. Like it should be in a good story! Finally I could breathe freely.
She needed a witness. Cara looked up at Kahlan with all the wonder of a three year old child, both eyes glittering anew like precious young worlds. "She’s alive." Awww, yes, Cara, Dahlia IS ALIVE!

. It only lasted a moment, and by the time Kahlan found her way to exuberance, Cara was already blasting her away, bending back her fingers, refusing her any further access. Hahaha! Shorty the Owner is back! So cute! ILU!

"Your Mistress needs water! Go!" Cara swung impatiently at her but missed altogether, as Kahlan was already long scrambling to obey. IDK, I also like then Cara is violent and owns XD!

TBC

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lexa_red November 21 2010, 06:52:12 UTC
Awww finding Dahlia. I'm glad you liked this!! It pained me beyond anything to see Cara like that but she loves and needs her Dahlia so of course it had to be like the worst experience of her life, right? She had already brought Dahlia back with the BoL once before but I think this time was different cuz they had parted on such heartbreaking terms with so much left unresolved...at least if Dahlia had died back then, they would've ended on a beautiful year and time. I also think Cara held out hope that not only would she be alive but that she would want Cara just as completely idk

lol you liked Cara's weird eyes...she's just a complicated girl XD

I should read your fic during day not at night time. Then probably I’ll feel more relaxed :) ROFL!!! That just gets me so good, I love it!! I know that if it were a movie, you'd have it in small screen, am I right?! lol

Then I finally fell in love with Kahlan, lol! Where did this whiny girl disappear? Kahlan became an action hero, she loves she Mistress but her head is cool enough to act. Awesome! Mission accomplished!! Cuz I gotta admit that even I was pretty proud of her in these moments. hehehe she carries our Cara and yeah, of course she just drops her twice omg I wouldn't have it any other way, that's our Kahlan!

I completely get the paralyzed Cara! What she saw was too much to handle! I like when Cara loses her cool and becomes vulnerable as she basically is. I just love too much a woobie!Cara! Loss is such a strange thing and even Mord'Sith can't escape what it does to the mind and body. Cara's vulnerability is so beautiful in the series when it surfaces...I think Dahlia truly means that much to her and I can never see her really recovering from that OMG!

Cara clutched Dahlia with white knuckles, and buried her head into her, letting out the single most violent, guttural and despairing cry of her life. All the sounds that she had produced over the years while in the grips of incensed torture were nothing but mild whispers compared to this scream and this pain. For the first time, she knew what real pain was. It was all over. Honestly? You shook me up here again! I cried a little more. I’m really getting old and sentimental, fuck… <3!!!!! I'm so in love with this cuz this image of Cara sorta haunted me and I'm thrilled it got to you. Awwww I love when you call yourself "sentimental" it's just so adorable. But no, you know when Cara screams, it's bad.

lol and of course Shorty the Owner takes issue with Kahlan keeping her hands on Dahlia after the heartbeat discovery...she wanted a witness, that's all. She didn't say put her Confessor paws all over her :P haha ILU too!

I also like then Cara is violent and owns XD lol oh me too, trust me, she's not going anywhere anytime soon :D

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areader221 November 22 2010, 03:55:32 UTC
Oh, dear, I realized now that you wrote your last reply somewhere after 3 am! I think I should reduce my comments or they might become as long as the fic, lol! I promise that next time I’ll cut myself short! You know that I loooove your story I don’t have to repeat it again! I’ll try to be laconic.
. I also think Cara held out hope that not only would she be alive but that she would want Cara just as completely idk So true :\ Cara was paralyzed by so many reasons! Guilt, fear for D, fear of rejection and so much more!
I know that if it were a movie, you'd have it in small screen, am I right?! Hey, youuuuuuu!
But honestly it would’ve been my fave “guilty pleasure” movie which I would watch repeatedly on a VERY small screen in a VERY bright room, lol! Hahaha, you know me!

Lol, I just liked how Kahlan scooped Cara and just dropped her on Dahlia with the instructions!!!

I think Dahlia truly means that much to her and I can never see her really recovering from that OMG! Agree. I think she would just sit there until she’d die cuz she doesn’t value much her own life and the one thing she would think about that she failed her Dahlia.
But no, you know when Cara screams, it's bad. I know it was a blood-chilling felling cuz she is no screamer.
She didn't say put her Confessor paws all over her :P Bwahaha! Exactly! Keep your Confessor PAWS to self XD!

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lexa_red November 22 2010, 18:40:48 UTC
lol yeah I totally forgot about the bright room!!

Yeah, Kahlan sorta saved the day a little bit XD hehe well I'm pretty confident that even I could carry Shorty if I had to :P But yeah, Kahlan and her paws will probably always prefer the drop method lol

Agree. I think she would just sit there until she’d die cuz she doesn’t value much her own life and the one thing she would think about that she failed her Dahlia. EXACTLY! I didn't know what to do either! I swear!!
I needed my Confessor bigtime

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areader221 November 25 2010, 06:00:24 UTC
K and Shorty should fight as a team. C will cut enemies from waist down and K can cut the throats.

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lexa_red November 26 2010, 07:33:55 UTC
LOL!!! I love when you problem-solve

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