Glad to read you in English (and believe me, I already tried google-translation from Spanish to French !) !!! I can't make any comment on the English, though ^^;; Anyway, I didn't think that'd be your writing style but I'm waiting for next part !
Writing in English feels as unnatural to me as translating into English, and yet sometimes you don't have the choice if you want to reach more people ^^''
That's OK!
Why is that? How did you think it'd be? I admit I was more careful with sentence structures than I'd normally be in Spanish. My friends made me cut a lot because I tend to write worms of many legs.
To tell you the truth, and as much fun as I had, I don't feel inclined to make the effort again any time soon...^^'' (Not to speak of all the work I gave to my betas. A beta is such a luxury!)
Yes, I think you have to control your words more and, well, try to think from the character's brain, not yours. See the world with his eyes and try to use the words they use. That's the fun part, after all. Like acting out in writing. I also feel more limited and prudent when giving voice to main characters, that is why I think I relaxed a bit more with the second part, but at this point I can't judge.
No tenia idea que escribas fics O_O como está en ingles, ni menos por el pot. pero... no me quita la curiosidad... me preguntaba si en algún día escribirás algo de oofuri? *_*
A lo mejor uno por fandom, si me da la vena, pero nada más ^^'' Nada, no te preocupes. No, de Oofuri no lo creo, porque es una serie de la cual no me gusta ni leer fic. Además, últimamente estoy muy quemada con la autora, así que si posteo sobre el manga, será para despotricar, probablemente. ^^'' Lo siento.
Bueno, a una de mis betas le hice resúmenes en inglés de los personajes, para que tuviera un contexto, pero porque me lo tenía que revisar a la fuerza. Aprecio la intención, pero no te fuerces tú tampoco, Lore, que es de PoT. Hay demasiadas referencias fandómicas. ^^''
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I can't make any comment on the English, though ^^;;
Anyway, I didn't think that'd be your writing style but I'm waiting for next part !
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That's OK!
Why is that? How did you think it'd be? I admit I was more careful with sentence structures than I'd normally be in Spanish. My friends made me cut a lot because I tend to write worms of many legs.
Thanks, I hope you like it!
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As for the writing style, it is just very different from the way you write your post, but I guess it's actually the same for most people !
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Yes, I think you have to control your words more and, well, try to think from the character's brain, not yours. See the world with his eyes and try to use the words they use. That's the fun part, after all. Like acting out in writing. I also feel more limited and prudent when giving voice to main characters, that is why I think I relaxed a bit more with the second part, but at this point I can't judge.
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como está en ingles, ni menos por el pot.
pero... no me quita la curiosidad... me preguntaba si en algún día escribirás algo de oofuri? *_*
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Nada, no te preocupes.
No, de Oofuri no lo creo, porque es una serie de la cual no me gusta ni leer fic. Además, últimamente estoy muy quemada con la autora, así que si posteo sobre el manga, será para despotricar, probablemente. ^^'' Lo siento.
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