FIC: Just a Bit.

[leucocrystal]

TITLE:  Just a bit.
(alternate link @ AO3)
FANDOM:  Veronica Mars
SUMMARY:  This is not happening in a supermarket.  With actual background music.
CHARACTER(S)/PAIRING(S):  Veronica's POV; Logan, Logan/Veronica, with very brief mention of Lianne.
SOUNDTRACK:  The Eurythmics' "Would I Lie To You?" and The Temptations' "I Second That Emotion" are

Comments

[krithos]

Well, yet another amazing one. I hear the voices. Which is something you'll understand in a minute. Whoo.

As always, insanely jealous of your talent.

Hatefully yours,

- W.

[leucocrystal]

Hee, now that I know, I'm glad you can hear the voices!  I love how, when I first read this comment, before you explained via IM what you meant, I thought it was some "I Hear the Bells" pun or something. [/DORK!]

Whee, I'm so glad you liked it!  You were, after all, the first to read it. :)

[sowell]

EGADS I loved that. Really lovely and melty. And I love both those songs.

[leucocrystal]

Hee, "melty," I like that.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it -- I've never been so unsure about a fic before, because with my odd sense of humor, I'm never sure if it'll translate properly, lol.

Thank you so much for reading! :)

[anifsemaj]

I loved this! Really nice!

[leucocrystal]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment -- it means a lot. :)

[taken_with_you]

I think you nailed Veronica's perspective perfectly. The dialogue and inner monologue were completely in character, and I loved so much about this fic, but I can't quite pinpoint my favorite part. I <3 trust fics, so yay.

[leucocrystal]

Oh wow, that is like a weight off my shoulders.  I always feel that Logan's voice comes so much more naturally to me, so I'm more nervous about these Veronica pieces I've been writing this week than anything.

Also, a compliment like that coming from a writer like you?  Yeah, AWESOME.  Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. ♥

[lil_litworm]

That was wonderful! It made me laugh and smile and melt inside at all the right places. I love your Logan voice, and I thought Veronica was spot on too. There were so many funny, and otherwise amazing moments, but for some reason I LoVed (^_~) this line:

"Taking a chance on a crazy whim, I decided to venture out into the general public and buy some actual food," he offers, making a funny sort of The hell? face at the oddly shaped apple he’s holding before putting it back and choosing another.

You just made my early morning way happier! ^_^

[leucocrystal]

Oh wow, thank you so much!  Nailing the voices is always my first concern, and the thing I'm most nervous about, so I'm really glad to hear that you think I managed it!

Hee, I had fun with that line.  Then again, I always have fun with Logan.  I never get tired of analyzing nor describing him.  Hmmm, wonder why? lol. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing -- it means a lot.