darling, you know, we're better unheard

[lettersandliars]

It's still 8/13 somewhere, right?!

Right.

Thanks to my darling dear iki-teru for both hashing this out with me and filling my night with giggles. And porn.

savages
axel/roxas, NC-17, 2841 words

Comments

[breathless_dawn]

OH. MY. GOD.

The bit with Larxene was my favourite. I loved how she cut Axel to the quick and how it made him (almost) feel.

All he'll find is the siren song of a phantom limb, an echo of what should be but isn't, and the hollow ache of feeling nothing, owning nothing, belonging to no one.

And this. thisssss.

i really need to get better at writing comments :/ but i loved this, really ♥ ♥

[lettersandliars]

The Larxene bit is also my favorite. Confession: I don't have a clue what happens when she cuts off at the end! Do they do sex? Does she knife him? Do aliens descend? All equally plausible, I think.

Thanks for reading, bb! I'm glad you liked it <3

[kaos_sparrow]

okay so I finally read this.
and
There are no words.
I love how you write them, and how it *isn't* a normal, healthy relationship filled with love and fluffy feelings.
It's bitter, and painful, and almost enough.

[lettersandliars]

eee, thank you! they are anything but normal, true fact.

[alice_pike]

ONE OF THESE DAYS, BB, I WILL ACTUALLY FIGURE OUT KH CANON; UNTIL THEN, I WILL CONTINUE TO READ YOUR FICS WITH GLEE.

So, I only actually know who Roxas and Axel are, but *handwave* I LOVE IT ANYWAY. The structure, the language, the atmosphere, your turns of phrase, just...all of it.

[lettersandliars]

bb, the people who write KH canon don't know KH canon, and it continues to inflate my ego that you read my fic despite not knowing the fandom well *g*

thank you so much! ♥