This Is More (4/12)

[letsriothailbby]

“Gerard knows.”

It’s a Wednesday when Mikey ends up saying this. Frank turned his head to look at him, eyes mild before they dropped to the table and he flicked a page in the book they were sharing to study while they sat on his bed.

“Frank.”

Really, it isn’t that Frank was trying to ignore him. It’s more or less a mixture of not

Comments

[xhailtothethief]

I've already told you this, but I love your story. I get Mikey's frustration because it really was bothering me that Frank wasn't really responding to him. But I also like how Frank didn't go after Mikey after he left. As much as I love that pair, I'm glad they're not all over and head over heels for each other. It keeps the story interesting, and I like how the crash wasn't thoroughly elaborated. I think you do a good job with describing what's going on in their heads and around them without exhausting the whole scene. It also works well because it leaves you hanging for the next chapter, despite how aggravating that is for my curiosity.

[dare_to_forget]

I absolutely love your style of writing. I started reading this story knowing it wasn't done (which I never do but read your prologue and was hooked), so I really hope you'll finish it. I'm loving it so far!