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May 01, 2004 19:40

guys, i feel like SHIT!~$#^#$%&^(&$^@$%#%@$%^%&

i have a sooorrree throat, stuffy nose, a HUGE headache... im all groggy... yeah, im havin NO fun over here!!!



guys, i wrote my bf my very first POEM EVER for our 6 month.. ha, actually todays our 5 month, but i wrote it for our 6 month, thinking it was gonna take me a month to do it cuz i am NOT a poet... but i thought it would be cute n sweet, since hes s0o good at writing poems, well... tell me what u guys think:

*I LOVE YOU*

YOU AND I BOTH KNOW THAT WRITING POEMS JUST ISN’T WHAT I DO,
I CAN’T RHYME, I CAN’T RECITE, BUT THIS IS ALL NOTHING NEW,
BUT I’M GIVING YOU THIS POEM TODAY,
AND I MEAN EVERY SINGLE WORD THAT I SAY…

MY HEART WAS BROKEN AND SHATTERED,
IF FELT LIKE NOTHING REALLY MATTERED,
ALL MY DREAMS WERE CRUSHED,
AND MY ALL MY LOVE WAS RUSHED.

I WAS SCARED AND HOPELESS,
EVERYTHING STARTED TO SEEM POINTLESS,
I GAVE UP ON THINGS THAT MEANT MOST TO ME,
THINKING, HOW COULD I EVER LET THIS BE?

BUT, WHEN MY LIFE SEEMED LIKE IT WAS DROWNING IN TEARS,
YOU CAME INTO MY LIFE, AND PUSHED OUT ALL MY FEARS,
YOU PUT THE BROKEN PIECES OF MY HEART BACK IN PLACE,
NOW EVERYTIME I’M WITH YOU, MY HEART STARTS TO RACE.

I GET BUTTERFLIES IN MY TUMMY, EVERYTIME YOU ARE NEAR,
I WANT TO STAY IN YOUR ARMS, EVERYTIME YOU ARE HERE,
I’VE NEVER FELT SO BEAUTIFUL, THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL,
I’VE NEVER BEEN THIS HAPPY, IT ALL JUST SEEMS TOO REAL.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU LOOK INTO MY EYES,
IT’S LIKE WE’RE FLOATING IN THE SKIES,
I LOVE THE WAY I FEEL, WHENEVER I’M WITH YOU,
IT SEEMS LIKE IT’S TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE.

SO, WHETHER OR NOT YOU THINK THIS POEM IS GOOD,
EVEN THOUGH, I REALLY THINK YOU SHOULD,
EVERY WORD I SAID, IT IS VERY, VERY TRUE,
ADAM JOHN, I AM SO INLOVE WITH YOU.

the end.
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