David Villa's Skinny Jeans (4/4)

[lets_get_messi]

Title: David Villa's skinny jeans.
Pairing: Lionel Messi/ David Villa.
Rating: NC-17/R 
Warnings: Language, drug abuse throughout, homophobia, and sexual scences.
Summary: !High school AU! Lionel Messi and David Villa are students who are set an art project together.
Words: 20,000~
Disclaimer: All of this is made up. Never happened. :) <3

Comments

[blaugranagram]

YAAAAAAY!!!! I fucking love it!!!

They were each other's Everest <3

But seriously, that was great! The beautiful admission of love/hate to the art teacher, Villa's hating Messi's hair, and the greatest three-word sentence of all time: "Fuck me, Villa"! The sentiment of this fic was so lovely, but still light enough that I didn't get all angsty-britches. Perfect. Thanks again for posting!

[lets_get_messi]

Aww! Thanks honey! Yeah! I didn't initially have it planned for them to be each other's Everest, but somehow it made sense after the progression of their journey. I hope you didn't find it too cheesy haha! I tried to steer away from typical romance throughout! haha xD Glad you liked it gorgeous, thanks so much for bearing with me on this one :) <3 x

[lets_get_messi]

I know it's a long time coming but I've just posted the next part to this, I took everyone's advice and added more, so if you're feeling up to it you can give it a read :) x

[lovemessivilla]

The entire story is lovely. The way you approached this story with bad boys Leo and David, their extremely evident love-hate relationship, their life of contrasting colors everything was so awesome. The ending of this part was great and made me smile hopefully. But I'd love it if you write more. Thanks for sharing these four parts, and hopefully there is more to come.;)

[lets_get_messi]

Aww glad you liked it dear! :) Yeah, I had never wrote the two of them from that sort of angle before. I didn't want to do a typical love relationship and I hope it came across that way. Yeah I may make it a 10 chapter long fic, I'm having ideas for it to be that way :) <3 x

[lets_get_messi]

I know it's a long time coming but I've just posted the next part to this, I took everyone's advice and added more, so if you're feeling up to it you can give it a read :) x

[messillaislove]

“And I have a feeling I'm going to spend an awful long time trying to ignore the things I love about him.” Lionel said quietly, fingers dancing across his painting, following the lines and curves of the naked expanse of chest just before he got to David's wings.."

These lines are so beautiful, it made my heart stutter and clench happily. Its a brilliant piece of writing and please don't end it here. My sincere requests to you to write more of this masterpiece, especially when they tell each other about their feelings. Thanks hon for sharing this and bearing with me!

[lets_get_messi]

Awww! I'm really glad you liked the idea of them being one another's Everests! :) Thank you so much my dear, yeah I am having ideas of turning this fic into a 10 chapter as I have so many more ideas and I'm not sure I can let the characters go yet :')

[lets_get_messi]

I know it's a long time coming but I've just posted the next part to this, I took everyone's advice and added more, so if you're feeling up to it you can give it a read :) x

[choco_cups]

So, I've just finished reading this and I wish I could tell you how much I love it. It made me feel so much for them. I love Leo's uncertainty and confusion, and David's "can I do something to you" throughout. And they were each other's Everest. I could never have predicted that. Overall, these four parts have been amazing to read, and I'll be eternally indebted to you if you write Part 5 and so on.

[lets_get_messi]

Awww! So happy you loved it my lovely! I have really appreciated your feedback throughout! Thank you for sticking with it! Yeah, I hoped it came across the typical teenage feelings and the naivety maybe reflected that but either way I hope you liked that they were one another's everests. Yeah I'm considering making it a 10 part fic :) <3 x Thanks again dear!

[lets_get_messi]

I know it's a long time coming but I've just posted the next part to this, I took everyone's advice and added more, so if you're feeling up to it you can give it a read :) x

[lets_get_messi]

Aww noooooo don't nearly die! xD haha! Really happy that you enjoyed it my lovely! Awww you are b-e-a-utiful! xD Yeah, I was worried about the ending being too cheesy incase it was too different from the rest of the fic. I'm glad you enjoyed it honey and thanks for sticking around :) <3 x

[lets_get_messi]

I know it's a long time coming but I've just posted the next part to this, I took everyone's advice and added more, so if you're feeling up to it you can give it a read :) x