okay, so totally random woke up this morning and scribbled this down, then spent the day putting music to it! Needs a good mixing, but I'm too lazy at the moment. Subsequently, the main line of the chorus has a little distortion...will fix it eventually....yah. lol.
So, totally random prezzie for Sunhawk. lol
http://home.austarnet.com.au/kennsealey/stay.mp3 This is the part I hate the most
Because its here that I'm vulnerable
I'm bothered by this pain
Feel I've failed, grown unstable
I'm so tired, I'm afraid
My confidence decayed
And this fear it pervades
A resting place delayed
Chorus:
So stay, dismayed
Our weaknesses are played
So stay, today
This pain seems a fair trade
So stay, watch me fray
Is it real, let me steal
Away.
I'm fine, just fine
There's no need to remind, me
Of this promise I've made
Though coherant thought has faded
Away, as if I died
Sank away, broke down and cried
At least I tried, yes I've tried
You can't say that I lied
Chorus
::pain and rage (echo)
watch as all these threads unwind
they come undone
Cast away your doubts, don't dream
On what you've done
I can hear my own voice laughing
laughing so loud
Let me out to play
you know I'll make you proud
Is that allowed?
Chorus
EDIT: Thank you for Kracken for pointing out the link was wrong. LOL. It's all good now