Juggling Act (2/?)

[shattered_moon]

Shorter chapter, but it was a good place to stop. Story starts at the opening of Season Four. Can Leslie juggle a relationship, a campaign, and a Little League Tournament?
Chapter 1

Comments

[anonymous]

Personally, I would be thrilled if you were to just post 1-2 of these little nuggets daily until the show comes back on the air. You don't have a job or a life or anything, do you? No? Just the urge to keep on writing? AWESOME!

Which is to say, hugely enjoying this, really looking forward to more.

[shattered_moon]

haha, thanks! I actually do have a job (which I wrote a portion of this at today.) Guess I need to get my butt in gear and write more. :)

[rizzy360]

Your job wouldn't happen to be a script writer for Parks & Recreation, would it? Because, seriously -- you have the dialogue (especially the talking heads) down to a T :)

[shattered_moon]

I wish! Actually, its doing accounting for a hotel. :)

[anonymous]

same anon-different chapter.

I wanna first agree with previous comments, the talking heads are on point.

I kinda hate you for making this chapter so short-but I'm just going to chalk it up to me being obsessed with Leslie/Ben fanfic (yah-I currently have no life & live vicariously through their fictional relationship. With that said, once again, you're writing is ace.

[anonymous]

same anon
*your (not you're) ugh, that bothers me that I did that and didn't catch it.

[lunamystik]

This is fun, and I agree with the previous posters re. the talking heads.

Question: at the end of Leslie and Ann's conversation, there's this:

"Well, we still have 20 minutes before ** comes back. Want to go over the Health Fair plans?"

What are the ** for?

[shattered_moon]

Oh crap, I forgot to delete that part. I had originally wrote this when I thought she still shared the office with that guy. But then I watched the Producers cut of the episode and found out he moved down the hall. Fixing now.

[sassynach]

I'm enjoying this story...off to read part 3!

thanks :)