Belated Birthday Smut

[lesinnocents]

Title: Shattered Innocence My Big Gay HP/FOB Crossover
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sirius Black/Pete Wentz
Summary: In what was meant to be the greatest year of his life, reigning over Hogwarts as a seventh year, Sirius Black was met with his downfall - a dark-eyed, grinning man with the deadliest of secrets and the most fatal of plans.
Disclaimer: I

Comments

[elessar]

HEE I FEEL LIKE IT'S MY BIRTHDAY, TOO xD God bless Marie.

Excellent chapter :D I think I nearly exploded from the addition of Patrick.

[lesinnocents]

Giggle. Yeah, I was pretty excited to work him in, and I've never even remotely worked with a Patrick like this one before, so that was fun. I just don't think he turned out evil :(

[megyal]

1) Okay. You have all right to be disappointed that I didn't comment on this because I lose. Serious.

2) WHY DO YOU NOT WRITE MORE SMUT. I dont even know. You write to make people sweat WITHOUT the smut. Holy. Wow.

3) The last line just summed up that sort of well-practiced nastiness that is so apparent between your evil Patrick and evil Pete; that is the way its supposed to be. Not to mention THAT THE SEX WAS HOT AND MADE OF OMG.

[lesinnocents]

1.) *gushes at you because you compliment me*

2.) *gushes more*

3.) *regains composure*

4.) *clears throat* Okay, thank you endlessly, because you make my life by reading my shit and actually complimenting me on it. You people own, srsly.

And yes, painful characterization with Patrick to try and make him evil though I adore his plushy cuteness and failing miserably. He didn't come out evil at all!

[megyal]

But he WAS!! Thats the thing! I found him delicious. It was just the way I've ever wanted Patrick to be written evilly. He just wasn't as evil as Pete, so its all relativity but I was here wishing he was real so he could get all slyly snarky all over the place.

oooohhhhhhh.

[erraticxthought]

I liked the actual story.

Someday I will read the smut. When I can read Pete/Patrick smut...and not become disturbed.

I'm going to blame you if my RP!Garrett accidentally sleeps with this RP!Frank that I found. I don't think he will. But I'm going to blame you anyway, I don't know why.

[lesinnocents]

Grrr, RP. You need to fill me in on some good comms, because I seriously cannot find a single one and it's causing me to spend six consecutive weeks barely touching my computer. The Mac is getting lonely!

Thank you, your highness, for your most gracious compliment.

[erraticxthought]

Well they advertise in slashypunkboys more frequently than one can count. You ought to be able to find an RP. Although some of them look a little incompetent? >:/

[elessar]

*butts in*

Join enroll_today! I mod it, and we just added a postsecrets comm which should be pretty entertaining XD

There's also cydoniaschool @ greatestjournal. And I'm also fairly active at just_records, which is just Fueled By Ramen people.

[bloodygoodgirl]

he seemed entirely too meek and sweet and adorable to possibly hold his own against someone like Peter That's just what he wants us to think. Hot and awesome and just yes.

[lesinnocents]

Patrick IS too sweet and adorable! That's why it was so hard for me to write him this way - I just couldn't picture it at all, haha. Thank you :)