Shattered Innocence 3

[lesinnocents]

Title: Shattered Innocence
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sirius Black/Pete Wentz
Summary: In what was meant to be the greatest year of his life, reigning over Hogwarts as a seventh year, Sirius Black was met with his downfall - a dark-eyed, grinning man with the deadliest of secrets and the most fatal of plans.
Disclaimer: I own neither any of J.K.

Comments

[megyal]

You are just. Amazing. The seduction is so...seductive, shit! I cant come up with a better word. Its like having your brain dipped in sensual. And through it all there's this dark undercurrent that you keep threading so well. I am so intrigued like this. I wait so patiently for these, because I know it will be fantastic to read, and you've not disappointed me once. Not once.

[megyal]

And you get extra love for the word "phallus". And the last bathroom scene? A crotch never read so elegant. No, really.

[lesinnocents]

A crotch never read so... wtf? Marie, are you on crack?

Teehee phallus.

[lesinnocents]

Much love to you, darling, for giving me so much of it in return. I seriously think this is all terribly written, because I force the chapters out, and it never comes out well when I force the words, but eh. Whatever floats your boat, sweetheart.

[skatepark]

you... are out of... your mind......

[lesinnocents]

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[heymahon]

i just started reading this and was kinda skeptic about reading since i haven't read slash in a really really long time and this.... this definitly owned. and it owned hard. i'm definitly excited to read more.

[lesinnocents]

Owned hard? That's such a modern-worded compliment, thank you! And if it makes you feel any better, I was extremely skeptical about writing it.